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Let's watching SUMO
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Today,I went to KOKUGIKAN to watch SUMO.
I like SUMO very much,and I especially like 'AMINISHIKI'.
Today AMINISHIKI lost,but I'm satisfied with SUMO.
I'm also looking forward to watching SUMO on TV tomorrow.
I hope that AMINISHIKI will win and get KACHIKOSHI!!
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Go to NAMASTE-INDIA
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Today,I went to NAMASTE-INDIA at Yoyogi park.
It's a very fantastic and incredible indian event.(And I like India.)
But,I went by myself so I become lonely.
I came back home,and now I'm drinking beer.
I hope that tomorrow I will not be lonely!
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If you say "I came back home" we know you mean your house/home.
Examples:
(1) I went to my house.
(2) I went home.
(3) This is my home.
(4) This is my house.
A home is where you live, but a house is a building.
Hope this helps!
>>THanks!!
Your comment is easy to understand!!
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Come on! Baby!!
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My dearest friend,she is pregnant now.
Her baby will come Novenmber 4th.
I'm looking forward to meeting her baby!
Because I love her,and
she couldn't get pregnant for 4 years.
The long-awaited baby is coming soon!!
>That is great! Not much longer now until the baby comes!
>>Thank you.She looks excited now! me too!