CC PART７ 添削後 Ⅱ

ではさっきの続き。

あ、名前のスペルミスは省略しますね、知らないんで。しれっと直しときますｗ

~AT THE GARDEN OF THE SCHOOL~

Girl: How about RaQuisha?

Girl2: Wow.

1: If it’s a girl.

2: Oh RaQuisha? Okay yeah, the ghetto called and They want a name back. Racuisha? Be For real? I you might as well call the baby, Food stamp.

Ashanti: All right, I was thinking, I could call her, Harmony.

2: Oh I like Harmony.

1: Harmony, what a cool. that's good. I like that.

2: What did Kenyon say?

A: Please, he wanna boy.

1: He’s thinking Figures. Speaking about Michel Jordan?

2: Yo what’s wrong with a girl?

1: Yeah dog, what’s wrong with men and women each other? boys grow into men, and men ain't worth the trouble.

Kenyon: ~Comes closer to them~

Do you have some other place to go? Something to do?

A: I guess he wants me to talk.all himself. So. See you later!

2: I’ll see you the class of history.Don't forget, I need your notes for history.

1: See you later.

A: I bought us 2 tickets for the dance.

K: Why did you talk to telling those girls about our baby? Now everybody’s gonna be known.

A: People’s going to know Kenyon.

K: That’s not the people’s business, Kyra.

おっとここでAshantiの役名出てきたけど、両方KなのでこのままAでいきます。

A: Why are you’re jumping up and down　my throat. 「フレーズ：to react angrily to something that someone says or does」 What’s wrong with you?

K: Look, me and coach have been talking, I he thinks I’m gonna can play college ball.

A: All right. So?

K: So how we gonna do that? There is And raise a baby.

A: I don’t know. I mean, I’m nothing to not saying it won’t be hard.

K: Hard?! It’s already hard. It’s killing The kid ain't even here yet and I'm baby, worried about how I’m gonna feed it. How I’m gonna pay for this and that nah nah nah. Everything. I’m not ready.

A: So what are you saying? You wanna out? Is that what you’re saying? It’s like a hard to Go ahead and say it.

K: Look, if I wouldn’t say wanted to be out our baby, I would've been out by now but Kira, it’s not about it at all. I love you. I wanna be with you.



A: Yeah, as long as you’re it's convenient.

K: I'm was thinking about what is the best for both of us.

A: You’re not thinking trying to think about the best for both of us, you’re trying to think about is what’s the best for you. You don’t me to have a this baby. You want me to be out our baby. to leave Richmond. You wanna be a rich man? You wanna go for playing college ball? So guess what, we ain’t got to be ready enough for nothing. All right? I’m ready up enough to do that, what I’m gonna do all by damn myself. You can take these, and you can go to dance just by yourself.

~AT SCHOOL~

President: I promise, you’re doing the best as Progress reports? You're the basketball coach.

Carter: Look, ma-am, we talked about this: I don’t see what’s the problem is.

P: Do you know what is the APS is? Mr. Carter.

Ca: No, I don’t.

P: Do you know The academic performance index. They judge school on the a scale of 1 to 10. 10’ll being the best. Do you have any idea where Richmond high school in on that scale?

Ca: No, ma-am. I have no idea.

P: Well we’re 1, Mr. Carter. We and have been 1 for last 7 years. This state is the worst rewards school for their performance. So every year I have less money has to pay faculty and staff.



Ca: Look ma-am, I…

P: Can I ask what did is you want, Mr. Carter?

Ca: I want my boys to go to college.

P: College?? Mr. Carter, Richmond graduate 50% of its students. The higher percentage ‘s beening girls you’re in my very educated opinion, the boys You have 15 playes on your team, they’re you'll be lucky to graduate 5 of them.

Ca: Well, I’m sorry, ma-am, but I don’t agree with you. Look, these boys signed the contract, maybe if you'd read one…

P: Your job is to win the basketball game, Mr. Carter. I suggested to you start doing your job.

Ca: And your job is educating kids. As suggestion you said, I suggest you start doing yours.

Until 56 min

CC PART ７ 添削後

From 47 min 47 sec

そして今回も同じような事が起こったのでまた２つに分けますね。

やっぱ長すぎますよね。

~AT SCHOOL, CARTER’S MAIL BOX IS EMPTY~

Lyle: ~Talk to a girl in the hallway~ Listen, shortly you. I’m just gonna be real for with you. Huh?? You are a my girl. When you’re in I get out on that court, and everything is getsing justto go crazy. All I’m doing gotta do is just think about you.

Ca: ~find him~

Lyle, why aren’t you in ammmm, geometry?? Are you lost?

L: I’m going right now, sir. Ah, there This is Betty.

Girl: Bella.

L: Oh, Bella. This is Bella. Bella, sir.

Ca: Go to the class.

~IN A CLASS ROOM~

Teacher: Don’t forget this that these project to do are due by at the end of this week. So offend of you need…

Ca: Excuse me. Are you Mr. Gesek? I don’t see Jr. Battle in this class.
T: Jr. Battle is like a solar eclipse. We rarely see him, but when we do, it’s always special.

Class: Haha.

Ca: Thank you.




~AT THE GYM~

Kenyon: ~reads news paper~

Surprised arrivedal to the puoll結果 is Richmond high in at 19th. Oilers possed have posted a perfect to the form is 9 and no mark. Winning is allowed to a plenty of on the road against perenninal 絶え間ない power house exhibition Exhivier and box at uni Baxter union. Ah Jr, you should read the rest of this, man. They blowing up you to in this paper.

JB: …..Oh no…..

K: Come on man, just read it.

Team mate: Oh he cannot read.

Kenyon & Warm: Shut up, man.

JB: Richmond’s center has been big as the oiler’s ah…. boi….. boy??

Ca: ~Enters to the gym~ Buid Buoyed高水準を保持した, the word is buid buoyed.

JB: Buid with Buoyed by Jr. Battle’s in team 19. 8 rebounds and 9 a night numbers.

W: hahaha, See? That’s my big nigga, have you read thisIf you was any bigger, you’red be my bigger nigga.

Team: ~stand up and chatting~

Ca: Sit down. SIT DOWN!!!

Team: Shut up and sit down.

Ca: Nigga is the dlagderogatory軽蔑的な term to use to insult our ancestors. If See white men use it, you’lld be ready to fight. You’re using it, teaches him to use it. You’re saying it’s cool, well it’s NOT cool. And you aren’t allowe around me. I don’t wanna hear that shit. We clear?!

Team: Yes, sir.

Ca: Mr. Warm. What do is it you want out of this basketball seasons?

W: Just To win thisat state championship, sir!!

Ca: Who won the state basketball championship the last season, Lyle?

L: I don’t know Hell if I know, sir.

Ca: Does anybody know?

Ca: What’s your father do for living, Mr. Lyle?

L: My father is in jail, sir.

Ca: ….oh Well, I’m sorry to hear that, sir. But that doesn’t have to be your life. My point is this: I have 4 senior on this team. Jr, Lyle, Kenyon, and Warm. All of whom I think they can play basketball at college level. College. That’s available option for all of you. But you have to perform in the class room to have that chance. You have to have a vision. Tell me. How do you see yourselves?

JB: Yeah, ESPN, baby.

Ca: It reminds me Mr. Battle. Mr. Gesek tells me he doesn’t see you in the his class room very often.

JB: Yeah, we’re cooled though on me and him. Mr. Gesek is a big basketball fan.

Ca: Uh hum, as of now, you’re suspended. Ah you can practice, but you can’t play until Mr. Gesek tells me you're caught up in his class. And that shows up shout out to the rest of you. You signed the contracts. You made me commitment. Now I have your schedules, and I’m beginning toll be getting report to from your teachers. If you don’t perform in the class room, you will not play.

JB: Yo, what’s up with that?

Ca: Sit down, Mr. Battle. All right, that’s 500 push ups.

JB: This is bullshit!! We won those games, NOT you!!

Ca: Oh that’s 1000 push ups for Mr. Battle Crown. You wanna try for 2000??

JB ~leave the gym~

Ca: Young man, think about the choice you’re making if you walk out the door.

JB: ~Left~

Ca: To the baseline.

CC PART 7 ~dictation~

From 47 min 47 sec

~AT SCHOOL, CARTER’S MAIL BOX IS EMPTY~

Lyle: ~Talk to a girl in the hallway~ Listen, shortly you. I’m gonna be real for you. Huh?? You are a my girl. When you’re in court, everything gets to go crazy. All I’m doing is think about you.

Ca: ~find him~

Lyle, why aren’t you in ammmm, geometry?? Are you lost?

L: I’m going right now, sir. Ah, there is Betty.
Girl: Bella.

L: Oh, Bella. This is Bella. Bella, sir.

Ca: Go to the class.

~IN A CLASS ROOM~

Teacher: Don’t forget this project to do by the end of this week. So offend of you need…

Ca: Excuse me. Are you Mr. Gethic? I don’t see Jr. Battle in this class.
T: Jr. Battle is like a solar eclipse. We rarely see him, but when we do, it’s always special.

Class: Haha.

Ca: Thank you.




~AT THE GYM~

Kenyon: ~reads news paper~

Surprised arrived to pull Richmond high in 19. Oilers possed to the form is 9 and no mark. Winning is allowed to a plenty of power house exhibition and box at uni. Ah Jr, you should read this, man blowing up to this paper.

JB: …..Oh no…..

K: Come on man, just read it.

Team mate: Oh he cannot read.

Kenyon & Warm: Shut up, man.

JB: Richmond’s center has been big as oiler’s ah…. boi….. boy??

Ca: ~Enters to the gym~ Buid, the word is buid.

JB: Buid with Jr. Battle’s in team 8 rebounds and 9 numbers.

W: hahaha, See? That’s my big nigga, have you read this bigger, you’re my bigger nigga.

Team: ~stand up and chatting~

Ca: Sit down. SIT DOWN!!!

Team: Shut up and sit down.

Ca: Nigga is the dlaggatory term to use to insult our ancistors. If white men use it, you’ll be ready to fight. You’re using it, teaches him to use it. You’re saying it’s cool, well it’s NOT cool. And you aren’t allowed me. I don’t wanna hear that shit. We clear?!

Team: Yes, sir.

Ca: Mr. Warm. What do you want out of this basketball seasons?

W: Just win this state championship, sir!!

Ca: Who won state the last season’s championship, Lyle?

L: I don’t know, sir.

Ca: Does anybody know?

Ca: What’s your father do for living, Mr. Lyle?

L: My father is in jail, sir.

Ca: ….oh Well, I’m sorry to hear that, sir. But that doesn’t have to be your life. My point is this: I have 4 senior on this team. Jr, Lyle, Kenyon, and Warm. All of whom I think they can play basketball at college level. College. That’s available option for all of you. But you have to perform in the class room to have that chance. You have to have a vision. Tell me. How do you see yourselves?

JB: Yeah, ESPN, baby.

Ca: It reminds me Mr. Battle. Mr. Gethic tells me he doesn’t see you in the class room very often.

JB: Yeah, we’re cooled on me and him. Mr. Gethic is just a big basketball fan.

Ca: Uh hum, as now, you’re suspended. Ah you can practice, but you can’t play until Mr. Gethic tells me you caught up in his class. And that shows up to the rest of you. You signed the contracts. You made me commitment. Now I have your schedules, and I’m beginning to report to teachers. If you don’t perform in the class room, you will not play.

JB: Yo, what’s up with that?

Ca: Sit down, Mr. Battle. All right, that’s 500 push ups.

JB: This is bullshit!! We won those games, NOT you!!

Ca: Oh that’s 1000 push ups for Mr. Battle Crown. You wanna try for 2000??

JB ~leave the gym~

Ca: Young man, think about the choice you’re making if you walk out the door.

JB: ~Left~

Ca: To the baseline.




~AT THE GARDEN OF THE SCHOOL~

Girl: How about Racuisha?

Girl2: Wow.

1: If it’s a girl.

2: Oh Racuisha? Okay yeah, They want a name back. Racuisha? For real? I might call the baby, Food stump.

Ashanti: All right, I was thinking, I could call her, Harmony.

2: Oh I like Harmony.

1: Harmony, what a cool. I like that.

2: What Kenyon say?

A: Please, he wanna boy.

1: He’s thinking about Michel Jordan?

2: Yo what’s wrong with a girl?

1: Yeah dog, what’s wrong with men and women each other?

Kenyon: ~Comes closer to them~

Do you have some other place to go? Something to do?

A: I guess he wants me to talk. So. See you later!

2: I’ll see you the class of history.

1: See you later.

A: I bought 2 tickets for the dance.

K: Why did you talk to those girls about our baby? Now everybody’s gonna be known.

A: People’s going to know Kenyon.

K: That’s not the people’s business, Kira.

A: Why are you’re jumping up and down. What’s wrong with you?

K: Look, me and coach have been talking, I think I’m gonna play college ball.

A: All right. So?

K: So how we gonna do that? There is a baby.

A: I don’t know. I mean, I’m nothing to won’t be hard.

K: Hard?! It’s already hard. It’s killing baby, worry about how I’m gonna feel it.

I’m gonna pay for this and nah nah nah. Everything. I’m not ready.

A: So what are you saying? You wanna out? Is that what you’re saying? It’s like a hard to say it.

K: Look, I wouldn’t say out our baby, but Kira, it’s not about it. I love you. I wanna be with you.

A: Yeah, as long as you’re convenient.

K: I was thinking about what is the best for both of us.

A: You’re not thinking about both of us, you’re trying to think about is what’s the best for you. You don’t me to have a baby. You want me to be out our baby. You wanna be a rich man? You wanna go for playing college ball? So guess what, we aren’t got to ready enough for nothing. All right? I’m ready up to do that, I’m gonna do all by damn myself. You can take these, and you can dance just by yourself.



~AT SCHOOL~

President: I promise, you’re doing the best as a basketball coach.

Carter: Look, ma-am, we talked about this: I don’t see what’s the problem is.

P: Do you know what is the APS is? Mr. Carter.

Ca: No, I don’t.

P: Do you know academic performance index. They judge school on the scale of 1 to 10. 10’ll be the best. Do you have an idea where Richmond high school in that scale?

Ca: No, ma-am. I have no idea.

P: Well we’re 1, Mr. Carter. We have been 1 for last 7 years. This state is the worst school performance. So every year has to pay faculty and stuff.

Ca: Look ma-am, I…

P: Can I ask what did you want, Mr. Carter?

Ca: I want my boys to go to college.

P: College?? Mr. Carter, Richmond graduate 50% of its students. The higher percentage ‘s been girls you’re educated opinion, the boys on your team, they’re lucky to graduate 5 of them.

Ca: Well, I’m sorry, ma-am, but I don’t agree with you. Look, these boys signed the contract, maybe if you read one…
P: Your job is to win the basketball game, Mr. Carter. I suggested to start doing your job.

Ca: And your job is educating kids. As suggestion you said, you start doing yours.

Until 56 min

CC PART 6 添削後

AT THE GYM~

Ca: Blah Blah Blah

Cruz: ~keep going~



~AT THE ROOM OF PRINCIPAL’S ROOM~

Principal: ~Calling~ The police’s are telling a very different story. I wish you would, yes ma-am.

Mr. Carter. How was are the boys?

Ca: Oh they’re great, ma-am. We’re 1-0. on and off. この1 and O(オー)ってのはどうやら勝ってるって意味みたいですね。

P: Very good. How may I help you?

Ca: Well, I…. I haved my boy’s sign contracts, and it requiresing them to meet certain academic standards.

P: Yes, I believe one of the faculty member mentioned that. Very interesting scarye tactics方針、戦略.

Ca: Well, I knowIn order for that’ll to be successful, I need their teachers to fill out the weekly progress report, and I'll have to know what how they’re doing in their class rooms.

P: Okay.

Ca: But I haven’t received anything from their teachers.

P: I don’t think see this is the task of ties in to your job as the basketball coach, Mr. Carter.

C: I took this job with the understanding I can could do this job it in my way.

P: And you can. Our next faculty meeting is in 2 weeks, I’ll remember them to bring it up.

Ca: Oh that’lld be great. Thank you. Ma-am.

P:….Thank you, sir.




~AT THE GYM~

Ca: Bring it in, guys. All right. This is for the other That's it for today. We have a game tomorrow. So get some rest tonight. Remember, ties and jackets tomorrow. Crian, (Let me see the record of Cruz) (C: No, he couldn’t) Mr. Cruz, I’m impressed with what you’ve done. But you came up short. You owe me 80 suicides and 500 push ups. Please leave my gym. Thanks Crian. Gentlemen, see you tomorrow.

Lyle: I’ll do push ups for him. You said we are team. One pressed person struggles, all we are struggle. When we are One player triumph, we all are triumph, right?~Pass the ball to Cruz ~

Team & Cruz & Coach: ……..

Kenyon: I’ll do some. I'll gonna run suicides, too.

JB: ~Starts suicides~

Damien: ~starts suicides~

Warm: I’ll do some, too. (with the expression of that he has to do)

Ca: Crian, just keep count. Call me when they’veer done.





~AT GAME~

Ca: Push up it x2. Move x2!! Let’s go!! Move your feet x2!! ~To Warm~ Palm’s up. Move your feet, all right?? Come on out. Mr. Cruz!! ~Member change with pulling Cruz’s top~ Hey, hey. What is your deepest fear, young man?

Cr: ??

Ca: ~ Tilt his neck ~ …. Go in.

W: Why he keep saying that `what is your deepest fear?’ What does that mean?

Ca: No, one more pass!!

Cr: ~ Without listening what the coach’s saying, 3 point shoot~

Ca: ~Glare Cruz~ Hands up!! Don’t be late!!

~Won the game~

~News paper which’s written the praise of Richmond basketball team~

~Sold the uniform of Richmond~

~Cheer leaders are dancing~

~Battle’s dunk shoot~

~Calendar of winning games~

Ca: What hell are you doing Cruz!! You allergic to lay-ups?

Cr: 3 point shoot

Ca: If you’re doing it do that again, you gonna go back to be glued to the bench!!
~Run~

Ca: Come on, let’s fit. Take Kick it in x2. Let’s fit.

~GAME~ Overwhelmed winning. Team plays with joking

W: Hey, what you gonna do, huh?? Huh?? ~To enemy team~

Kenyon: Dunk

Team mate: Kenyon, pose x2. Smile!

K: ~Pose~

Ca: Kenyon, go back!! Just play the damn game.

~PRACTICE~

Ca: Right here, that’s me, baby. That’s me. I did that. I threw it out drew that up!! Yeah!! Haha…… Run it again. Hoo~ all day baby, all day. Can’t stop that x2!!

Warm: Hey coach, your shoe’s untied, sir.

Co: Oh, thank you Mr. Warm. Hoo!! Look at the ball that bow x2, I tied it x2. I tied that shit!! Can I tie get something on the ball bow ?, let me guess some……~Pretends to hi five with Warm~

W: ~tries to do it with coach~

Co: ~Stops it~ Ah, are you crazy? What is wrong with you? ~Grab his top~ What’s wrong with all of you? Since win when with is winning was not enough, playing hard not enough? Now you have to humiliate you opponent 対戦相手. Turn it Taunt嘲る him in after every after score, you won 4 games last season. 4. What gives you the right to take taint the game that I love was with trash talk and turned in taunting? What gives you the right to wear the Richmond and chess on your chest, and act like pounds punks.

Kenyon: Coach, they were joining jawingくどくどしゃべる, too.

Ca: So?? You can’t show some class?? Act like a champion? You owe me 500 push ups of piece. On the line. Now.

Tem: Damn, come on. ~Push up~

CC PART 6 ~DIC~

やれやれ、やっとPART6まできましたが。実はまだ半分以下ｗ

しかもちょいちょい聞き取りにくい所は省略させてもらってます。

映画のセリフの量なんて考えた事なかったけど、

すごい人数の人間が、すごい量の言葉を喋って一本の映画が成り立ってるんですね～。

ではいってみよう。


AT THE GYM~

Ca: Blah Blah Blah

Cruz: ~keep going~



~AT THE ROOM OF PRINCIPAL’S ROOM~

Principal: ~Calling~ The police’s telling very different story. I wish you would, yes ma-am.

Mr. Carter. How was the boys?

Ca: Oh they’re great, ma-am. We’re on and off.

P: Very good. How may I help you?

Ca: Well, I…. I have my boy’s sign contracts, and it requires academic standards.

P: Yes, I believe one of the faculty member mentioned that. Very interesting scary tactics.

Ca: Well, I know that’ll be successful, I need their teacher to fill out the weekly progress report, and I have to know what they’re doing in their class rooms.

P: Okay.

Ca: But I haven’t received anything from the teachers.

P: I don’t think this is the task of the basketball coach, Mr. Carter.

C: I took this job with understanding I can do this job in my way.

P: And you can. Our next faculty meeting is in 2 weeks, I’ll remember them to bring it up.

Ca: Oh that’ll be great. Thank you. Ma-am.

P:….Thank you, sir.




~AT THE GYM~

Ca: Bring it in, guys. All right. This is for the other day. We have a game tomorrow. So get some rest tonight. Remember, ties and jackets tomorrow. Crian, (Let me see the record of Cruz) (C: No, he couldn’t) Mr. Cruz, I’m impressed what you’ve done. But you came up short. You owe me 80 suicides and 500 push ups. Please leave my gym. Thanks Crian. Gentlemen, see you tomorrow.

Lyle: I’ll do push ups for him. You said we are team. One pressed struggle, all we are struggle. When we are triumph, we all are triumph, right?

Team & Cruz & Coach: ……..

Kenyon: I’ll do some. I gonna run suicides, too.

JB: ~Starts suicides~

Damien: ~Pass the ball to Cruz and starts suicides~

Warm: I’ll do some, too. (with the expression of that he has to do)

Ca: Crian, just keep count. Call me when they’ve done.





~AT GAME~

Ca: Push up x2. Move x2!! Let’s go!! Move your feet x2!! ~To Warm~ Palm’s up. Move your feet, all right?? Come on. Mr. Cruz!! ~Member change with pulling Cruz’s top~ Hey, hey. What is your deepest fear, young man?

Cr: ??

Ca: ~ Tilt his neck ~ …. Go in.

W: Why he keeps saying `what is your deepest fear?’ What does that mean?

Ca: No, one more pass!!

Cr: ~ Without listening what the coach’s saying, 3 point shoot~

Ca: ~Glare Cruz~ Hands up!! Don’t be late!!

~Won the game~

~News paper which’s written the praise of Richmond basketball team~

~Sold the uniform of Richmond~

~Cheer leaders are dancing~

~Battle’s dunk shoot~

~Calendar of winning games~

Ca: What are you doing Cruz!!

Cr: 3 point shoot

Ca: If you’re doing it again, you gonna go back to the bench!!
~Run~

Ca: Come on, let’s fit. Take it in x2. Let’s fit.

~GAME~ Overwhelmed winning. Team plays with joking

W: Hey, what you gonna do, huh?? Huh?? ~To enemy team~

Kenyon: Dunk

Team mate: Kenyon, pose x2. Smile!

K: ~Pose~

Ca: Kenyon, go back!! Just play the damn game.

~PRACTICE~

Ca: Right here, that’s me, baby. That’s me. I did that. I threw it out!! Yeah!! Haha…… Run it again. Hoo~ all day baby, all day. Can’t stop that x2!!

Warm: Hey coach, your shoe’s untie, sir.

Co: Oh, thank you Mr. Warm. Hoo!! Look at the ball x2, I tied it x2. I tied that shit!! Can I tie on the ball, let me guess some……~Pretends to hi five with Warm~

W: ~tries to do it with coach~

Co: ~Stops it~ Ah, are you crazy? What is wrong with you? ~Grab his top~ What’s wrong with all of you? Since win with winning was not enough, playing hard not enough. Now you have to humiliate you opponent. Turn it in every after score, you won 4 games last season. 4. What gives you the right to take the game that I love was trush talk and turned in. What gives you the right to wear the Richmond and chess, and act like pounds.

Kenyon: Coach, they were joining, too.

Ca: So?? You can’t show some class?? Act like a champion? You owe me 500 push ups of piece. On the line. Now.

Tem: Damn, come on. ~Push up~

ぷぷ。このシーン大好きなんです。何回見ても笑える。サミュエル・L・ジャクソンの悪ノリの熱演っぷりと、生徒の戸惑いっぷりがたまりません。

CC PART 5 添削後

はいっ、ビザの申請第一段階終わりました～。や～肩凝ったｗ

でも無事行けそうで嬉しいです。この調子でいくと３月には取れるかな～？

うきうき。

さて、添削いきます。

Ca: Gentlemen, let’s review the acculate our Hurclules game, sir. Shall we?

W: Yo, what is yell out my numbers, sir.

Ca: Ah Mr. Warm, you were 5 and 4.

W: No, sir. I had 12 points and 18 shoots 8 assists sir.

Ca: No, sir, Mr. Warm. You had 5 turning over and 4 missed free throws , sir.

Team: Hahahahaha.

Ca: Now we’re talking about finding a middle in fundamentals基本原理 here. Until we learn them I’m adding you a practice at 6 am, we shot 56 %.... Mr. Cruz. Are you lost sir?

Cr: What I gotta do to play?

Ca: Mr Cruz, you do not want to know the answer to that question.
Now what as I was saying is, as a team, we shot 56% from the line. From now on, before you leave my gym, you must pay extra an exit price of 50 may made free throws before you can go. That’s for everybody. ….. Okay, Mr. Cruz, before you can play on this team, you owe me, 2500 push ups, and 1000 suicides.

Team: Damn.

Ca: Oh, and they must be completed by Friday.
Today is flavor. Offense. Now I have a sister. Her name is Linda. Linda is smart, she’s political, and, actually she’s radical. Linda has got a big aflo. Linda is the pick and roll offense. For we get into that, worm up, give me a lay up and down line. Let’s go.

Kenyon: Damn, how many sisters is he got?

JB: Who knows.

Team: Come on, over here. We’re bring break it up. Let’s go guys, energy!! Energy!! Right here x2, I’m open x2!!
Heyx3. This is Yes, it's important to move without the ball, but you gatta be patient on the weak side screen, set up your mind man. Come off for his shoulder hart hard, okay?? Switch it up!!

Cruz: ~Training what Carter said~

Ca: What is your deepest fear Mr. Cruz?? That’s you're inadequate 社会的に不適格な人? Give up Mr. Cruz, go home.

Cr: ~Keep going~

Ca: Hey now you’ll All right, I want 7 passes before you shoot. 7.
~To Cruz~
You know your task’s impossible before Friday, right??

Cr: ~Still keep going~

Ca: ~To the team~

Move x2!! Run it back x2!!



~At Ashanti’s house~

K&A: ~Kissing~

K: What time your mom in the getting home?

A: She doesn’t get off for another hour.

~Baby starts crying~

A: Ah, that’s Miles.

K: What?!

K: ~Turn off the fire~

A: Say hi to uncle Kenyon. Say hi…. All right, don’t worry about it. You gonna He'll go back to sleep right up this bubble after his bottle. Right? Boo-boo.

K: Yo, the problem is not the probably in time for your mom to get home. Or maybe when your cousin get back home on Friday here from getting her hair fried and dlyed. Like She’s gonna get on hold you let you. can afford all that shit. It’s her baby anyway.

A: Well, my mother has somed to work, a double shift, but they cut it off all of the her over time. And my cousin, don’t be trying to this her.

K: She’s not gonna do this You said we'd be alone. You can’t call this alone?

A: Well? That’s why we need an own spot. Did you turn this off??!

K: Yeah, it was boiling.

A: Oh come on~. We’ll turn it down, not off. This is milk, butter and cheese. We cannot afford to waste this. And hold him up. All right Miles, here you we go. That’s Gotta cool off the a minute.

K: You’ve ever think about what you were gonna do before you’were pregnant.

A: What you mean? Going to the junior college?

K: Yeah.

A: I mean yeah, I thought about it. I could go later, I guess.

K: You have to get some work after having you have baby. Me too.

A: So I’ll work.

K: Aren’t How you gonna go to school?

A: Why always you asking me as always all these question?? And you gonna put your hands under his arm. You gotta have your hand under his sit him on your chest, hold him.

K: I am holding him.

A: You ain't doing it right. you gotta soothe 落ち着かせる sue him, Kenyon?

K: Look, I’m not gonna don't know how to do this.

A: Hah… You’ll get it.

K: Hey I gonna help my mom. And with some stuff. See you later, all right?

A: Call me later, okay?

K: Later.

CC PART 5 ~DIC~

From32 min

~At the gym~

Ca: Gentlemen, let’s review the acculate our game, sir.

W: Yo, what is my number, sir.

Ca: Ah Mr. Warm, you were 5 and 4.

W: No, sir. I had 12 points and 18 shoots sir.

Ca: No, sir, Mr. Warm. You had 5 turning over and 4 miss free throw, sir.

Team: Hahahahaha.

Ca: Now we’re talking about finding a middle in here. Until we learn them I’m adding you practice at 6 am, we shot 56 %.... Mr. Cruz. Are you lost sir?

Cr: What I gotta do to play?

Ca: Mr Cruz, you do not want to know the answer to that question.
Now what I was saying is, as a team, we shot 56% from the line. From now on, before you leave my gym, you must pay extra price of 50 may free throw before you can go. That’s for everybody. ….. Okay, Mr. Cruz, before you can play on this team, you owe me, 2500 push ups, and 1000 suicides.

Team: Damn.

Ca: Oh, and they must be completed by Friday.
Today is flavor. Offense. Now I have a sister. Her name is Linda. Linda is smart, she’s political, and, actually she’s radical. Linda has got a big aflo. Linda is the pick and roll offense. For we get into that, worm up, give me a lay up and down. Let’s go.

Kenyon: Damn, how many sisters is he got?

JB: Who knows.

Team: Come on, over here. We’re bring it up. Let’s go guys, energy!! Energy!! Right here x2, I’m open x2!!
Heyx3. This is important to move without the ball, you gatta be patient on the weak side screen, set up your mind. Come off for shoulder hart, okay?? Switch it up!!

Cruz: ~Training what Carter said~

Ca: What is your deepest fear Mr. Cruz?? That’s your adequate? Give up Mr. Cruz, go home.

Cr: ~Keep going~

Ca: Hey now you’ll 7 passes before you shoot. 7.
~To Cruz~
You know your task’s impossible before Friday, right??

Cr: ~Still keep going~

Ca: ~To the team~

Move x2!! Run it back x2!!



~At Ashanti’s house~

K&A: ~Kissing~

K: What time your mom in the home?

A: She doesn’t get off another hour.

~Baby starts crying~

A: Ah, that’s Miles.

K: What?!

K: ~Turn off the fire~

A: Say hi to uncle Kenyon. Say hi…. All right, don’t worry about it. You gonna go back to sleep right up this bubble. Right? Boo-boo.

K: Yo, the problem is not the time your mom get home. Or maybe when your cousin get back home on Friday here. She’s gonna get on hold you let you. It’s her baby anyway.

A: Well, my mother has some work, double shift, but they cut it off all of the time. And my cousin, don’t be trying to this.

K: She’s not gonna do this alone. You can’t call this alone?

A: Well? That’s why we need an own spot. Did you turn this off??!

K: Yeah, it was boiling.

A: Oh come on~. We’ll turn it down, not off. This is milk, butter and cheese. We cannot afford to waste this. And hold him up. All right Miles, here you go. That’s cool off the minute.

K: You’ve ever think about what you gonna do before you’re pregnant.

A: What you mean? Going to the college?

K: Yeah.

A: I mean yeah, I thought about it. I could go later, I guess.

K: You have to get some work after having baby. Me too.

A: So I’ll work.

K: Aren’t you gonna go to school?

A: Why always you ask me as always question?? And you gonna put your hands under his arm. You gotta have your hand under his chest, hold him.

K: I am holding him.

A: You gonna sue him, Kenyon?

K: Look, I’m not gonna do this.

A: Hah… You’ll get it.

K: Hey I gonna help my mom. And some stuff. See you later, all right?

A: Call me later, okay?

K: Later.

CC PART 4 添削後Ⅱ

やれやれ明日からやっと仕事が始まります。とは言っても就きたかった仕事！というよりも割と責任感のなさ、人間関係のなさで選んだ、WILDな仕事ですｗ

だって２カ月だけだし、あくまで勉強したいので。で、勉強してると全然体動かさないから動く系の仕事。お金を稼ぎたいというよりは、生活にリズム付けたい、運動したい、という事で始めた訳なので労働時間も労働日数もめちゃくちゃ短いです。

あ～楽しみだなぁ～。ちょっと先の見えない休息を取ると、すぐこんな気持ちになれちゃうんですね～。

さて今日も昨日の続きからいってみよう。

~At the day of the first game in locker room~

Ca: Now I know you're all concerned it, that, we didn’t work out the on our offence doing during practice. We have all season to do that. But what did we do in practice, Mr. Stone?

K: Run?

Ca: That’s right. So what do you think what I want you to do on offense tonight??

K: Run??

Ca: Correct again. I want you to run.

~Game~

Ca: I want you to run every second that practice tricking that clock is ticking all game long.

Cruz: We’re Put him back on the bench bitch!

Rebound!! Rebound!!

Home(Richmond) 24-32 Guests

Let’s go!! Watch out!! Screen!!

H53-56G ~The rest of time is 45 sec of 4th quarter~

Take him out, right there!!

Jump ball, right?

Ca: Oh ref, come on…

Ref: Green ball.

Ca: Time, sir.

Wife: They Bad call it ref! That was a jump ball damn it!!

Ref: Time out.

Coach of another team: Come on, come on, hurry huddle up ちぢこまる. Hustle up. Come here. Get over here.

Ca: Yo Carter, you’re in.

W: Coach, he’s a freshman!

Ca: You wanna coach?

W:….

Ca: Right. Take it a deep breath guys. Come on, deep breath. You’re tired?

Team: No, sir.

Ca: Those guys are exhausted. ~By seeing against the guest team~

By the sky from Mr That's why this guys miss that free throw, we need When he does, Warm and Lyle is are our first option. Push the ball and throw the hall, Go hard to the hole. everybody attack the boards ball. Do you got that?? All right, Richmond on 1,2,3.

Ca: 1, 2, 3…

Team: RICHMOND!!!!

Ca: All right guys, it’s you're in better shape than they are. to say it off. Box out x2.

Ref: 1 shot.

Enemy: ~out~

JB: ~take the rebound~D: ~Shoot~

55-56

D: ~make a fake to shoot and pass the ball to Warm~

Warm:~ shoot~

57-56

~All of the team players hugged each other and rejoiced at the victory~

Ex. Team mates include Cruz: They A win like that don’t only that mean nothing!! Cuz I can’t They can't play anyway, do you hear me?

~On the way from leaving the gym~

W: ~pretends to be like an interviewer~

Okay Shaq, so you dominated down it all the low tonight?? Any thoughts??

J.B: Well, I dropped 20 pieces, covy Kobe played this game, we made a the champions, we ain't the championsship no more.

W: Undefeaded.

Cruz: Yo men, for on the real, that was an the worst game I’ve ever seen in my life. I thought it was just that shit would never end. I was dying in bleachers.屋根なし観客席

Lyle: That’s right dog, you were in bleachers, weren't you? our team. We’re in the corner of court handling our business.

W: That’s right. We won the game on and on 1-0, bitch!!

Cr: Yo, on the real, Harkly is the weekly weak, B, and y'all barely and very beat them.

Kenyon: Yo, Cruz, why you throwing salt, man? we undefeated. Show us love, son.

JB: That’s right, we undefeated.

~Renny comes by his car~

Cr: Yo, I’ll talk to you check y'all later ah-i??

R&his men: Yo what’s up, yo be careful, the rock is high block is hot man,

R: How are you doing man.

Cr: Chilling man.

R: You look good.

Cr: I have some paper for you. ~with giving money~

R: Now we're talking. How are you living Timo?

Cr: I’m good.

R: Are you all right?? For real?

C: Yeah.

R: Yo, take some. ~With handing some money~

C: No, I’m all right.

R: No no no, take some. Please. Don't worry. You’re doing good, you’re doing good, bro.

C: Thank you.

R: No, don’t thank me, thank YOU, you earned it.

~Gives a pack of weed to Cruz~

Am I seeing you?

C: Yeah, next week.

R: Okay, I’m seeing you. Keep it up.

C: ~stare the team mate with eyes which say like that he envies them. And go home~

と、まぁ。そんな訳で。

もういっこ更新行きまーす。

ちゃっちゃと終わらせて、このパソコンで他の映画も見たいから、巻きで。

CC PART4 添削後

CC From 22m~

なんだか画面がフリーズするので、データが多いのかな？っと、半分に分けます。

~In the Carter’s house~

Damien: 20 of It's one of your contracts, sir. I’ve made amended　修正する that contracts. You required your player to maintain 2.3 grades points in average, I’ve committed to get maintaining 3.5, you required 10 hours community service, but and I committed to 50, and unexcuse absences欠席 any other disciplineary issue at the school, you can be all fine with nullify無効にする this agreement and send me to any schools you want.

Ca: How many days do I have to consider this offer?

D: None. At the second page, there’s a letter you need to sign on it. To that comfirms my withdrowal from St. Francis. Then They know I’m leaving.

Ca: What? You withdrew from St. Francis?

D: I called Richmond. They accepted it expected me there in the morning.

Ca: You called Richmond?! You should’ve spoken to me first about this.

D: It was a personal choice for me.

Ca: Ah hah, but I can fix them on all that in the morning.

D: So Sir please listen, all what I wanna do is playing for you. For all the tough students in I'm one of the top students at Richmond, I mean one of the tallest top in whole school, and I agree have great SAT I can go to any college in this country. I’m asking you to trust me.

Ca: You really wanna do this, huh?

D: ~Nod~

Ca: Okay. Part of your growing up is making your own decision and living for with the consequences. 3.7. And you will earn every minutes a of playing time.






~Scene changed, at school~

D: Morning, sir.

Lyle: ~rapping~ My name’s J Lyle, they call me Wild, it’s all right, Kenyon’s mom tonight say nah,

Kenyon: Say what?

L: ~rapping~ You might think I’m wrong, but she’s not got these thongsひも型のビキニ.

Warm: Yo x5, this is Malcom X from St. Francis. Hey yo, Malcom!!

J.B: What’s up, man?!

L: What are you doing here, sir?

D: I transferred to Richmond.

J.B: Oh no, sir son. I think you’re just lost.

D: No, I am actually lost. Tell me how to get ahh…

K: Bel Air? Hey yo Warm, for tell your man Fresh Mr. prince how to get to his meantion.

W: Oh my presure. Fresh bitch. I’ll I hope seeing you in this hall way or on mean the court in this evening, right?? I can’t wait. Watch with your fire browns.
fire brownsってなんなんでしょ～？調べても載ってないっ。

~At the gym~

Ca: Everybody’s up. Then Today, we are going to play difense.

D: Sorry, sir.

Ca: Gentlemen, this is a new player. Damien Carter, he’s my son and he’s late. Sir, you owe me 20 suicides.

D: Sir, it’s my first day today and I had to stay mathmetic class…

Ca: Basketball practice starts at 3, as a of 2:55, you are late. Get change you at in the locker room, then you’ll Do your suicides on the far side floor out of the court so as to not disturb us. All right gentlemen, give me 2 lines. Okay young sirs, I’m taking you We're gonna take it to go to the next levels. Everything I knew about basketball, I learned from women. I have a sister. Her name is Dianne. She’s always on my cases about every little thing. Matter of fact実際のところ, she still is. Turn down that radio!! Did you eat the last piece of cake!? Did you drink all of the Cool-A?! She was always in my face. So when I call Dianne, we gonna play straight man to man, presure difense.



~Practice~

Ca: Warm!! No x5 sir, look at your difense of presure posture姿勢, come on, split your man, back’s straight buttしり down, this hand, turn to get press line guards against the passing lane and this hand is to protects the cross over. All right?? Palm’s up, and tell me how toGet your head in the game.


Ca: Now we have Delilah. She's matured and our was my childhood sweetheart.

Player: Sir, is was she hot??

Ca: Oh-, yes, sir. she was steamingly hot. But she was a devil. That girl was evil, I remember once she tricked me and into stealing the brownies from the Christ king first practice big Baptist church seat bake sale, she smiles and guard out of I awaredgot her way out of it, while O damn near had to wear a on my a pillow god demn on my butt platform. Mom work and for a month before I could sit down. Delilah, gentlemen, she’s a our trap difense.


W: Take note, freshman, he’s This is as close as you not gonna get to play.
Ca: Come on x2, move x2!! Delaira x3!!

CC PART4 Dic

CC From 22m~

~In the Carter’s house~

Damien: 20 of contracts, sir. I’ve made that contracts. You required player to maintain 2.3 grades points in average, I’ve committed to get 3.5, you required 10 hours community service, but I committed 15, and excuse absences any other discipline at the school, you can be all fine with agreement me to any schools you want.

Ca: How many days do I have to consider this offer?

D: None. At the second page, there’s a letter you need to sign on it. To withdrow from St. Francis. Then I’m leaving.

Ca: What? You withdrew from St. Francis?

D: I called Richmond. They accepted it in the morning.

Ca: You called Richmond?! You should’ve spoken to me first about this.

D: It was a personal choice for me.

Ca: Ah hah, but I can fix them on.

D: So please listen, all what I wanna do is playing for you. For all the tough students in Richmond, I mean one of the tallest in whole school, and I agree SAT I can go to any college in this country. I’m asking you to trust me.

Ca: You really wanna do this, huh?

D: ~Nod~

Ca: Okay. Part of your growing up is making your own decision and living for consequences. 3.7. And you will earn every minutes a playing time. 

~Scene changed, at school~

D: Morning, sir.

Lyle: ~rapping~ My name’s Lyle, they call me Wild, it’s all right, Kenyon’s mom say nah,

Kenyon: Say what?

L: ~rapping~ You might think I’m wrong, but she’s not.

Warm: Yo x5, this is Malcom X from St. Francis. Hey yo, Malcom!!

J.B: What’s up, man?!

L: What are you doing here, sir?

D: I transferred to Richmond.

J.B: Oh no, sir. I think you’re just lost.

D: No, I am actually lost. Tell me how to get ahh…

K: Hey yo Warm, for Mr. prince how to get to mention.

W: Oh my presure. I’ll see you in this hall way or on the court in this evening, right?? I can’t wait. Watch your fire browns.

~At the gym~

Ca: Everybody’s up. Then, we are going to play diffense.

D: Sorry, sir.

Ca: Gentlemen, this is a new player. Damien Carter, he’s my son and he’s late. Sir, you owe me 20 suicides.

D: Sir, it’s my first day today and stay mathmetic class…

Ca: Basketball practice starts at 3, as a 2:55, you are late. Get change you at the locker room, then you’ll suicides on the floor out of the court to not disturb us. All right gentlemen, give me 2 lines. Okay young sir, I’m taking you to go to next levels. Everything I know about basketball, I learned from women. I have a sister. Her name is Dianne. She’s always on my cases about every little thing. Matter fact, she still is. Turn down the radio!! Did you eat last piece of cake!? Did you drink all of the Cool-A?! She was always in my face. So when I call Dianne, we gonna play straight man to man, presure diffence.

~Practice~

Ca: Warm!! No x5 sir, look at your diffense of presure, come on, split you man, back’s straight but down, this hand, turn to get press line and this hand is to protect cross over. All right?? Palm’s up, and tell me how to game.

Ca: Now we have Deraira. She's matured and our sweet heart.

Player: Sir, is she hot??

Ca: Oh-, yes, sir. she was steamingly hot. But she was a devil. That girl was evil, I remember one she trick me and steal the browny from the Christ king first practice big church seat, she smiles and guard out of I awared on my pillow god demn on my platform. Mom work and sit down. Dilaira, gentlemen, she’s a trap diffenses. 

W: Take note, freshman, he’s close, you not gonna get to play.

Ca: Come on x2, move x2!! Delaira x3!!

~At the day of the first game in locker room~

Ca: Now I know you all concerned it, we didn’t work out the offence doing practice. We have all season to do that. But what did we do in practice, Mr. Stone?

K: Run?

Ca: That’s right. So what do you think what I want you to do on offence tonight??

K: Run??

Ca: Correct again. I want you to run.

~Game~

Ca: I want you to run every second that practice tricking all game long.

Cruz: We’re back on the bitch!

Rebound!! Rebound!!

Home(Richmond) 24-32 Guests

Let’s go!! Watch out!! Screen!!

H53-56G ~The rest of time is 45 sec of 4th quarter~

Take him out, right there!!

Jump ball, right?

Ca: Oh ref, come on…

Ref: Green ball.

Ca: Time, sir.

Wife: They call it jump ball damn it!!

Ref: Time out.

Coach of another team: Come on, come on, hurry up. Come here. Get over here.

Ca: Yo Carter, you’re in.

W: Coach, he’s a freshman!

Ca: You wanna coach?

W:….

Ca: Right. Take it breath guys. Come on, deep breath. You’re tired?

Team: No, sir.

Ca: Those guys are exhausted. ~By seeing against the guest team~

By the sky from Mr free throw, we need Warm and Lyle is our first option. Push the ball and throw the hall, everybody attack the ball. Do you got that?? All right, Richmond on 1,2,3.

Ca: 1, 2, 3…

Team: RICHMOND!!!!

Ca: All right guys, it’s better to say it off. Box out x2.

Ref: 1 shot.

JB: ~take the rebound~D: ~Shoot~

Enemy: ~out~

55-56

D: ~make a fake to shoot and pass the ball to Warm~

Warm:~ shoot~

57-56

~All of the team players hugged each other and rejoiced at the victory~

Ex. Team mates include Cruz: They don’t only that nothing!! Cuz I can’t , do you hear me?

~On the way from leaving the gym~

W: ~pretends to be like an interviewer~

Okay Sheck, so you dominated down it all the night?? Any thoughts??

J.B: Well, I dropped 20 pieces, covy play this game, we made a champions, championship no more.

W: Undefeaded.

Cruz: Yo men, for the real, that was an worst game I’ve ever seen in my life. I thought it was just never end.

Lyle: That’s right dog, you were in our team. We’re in the corner of our business.

W: That’s right. We won the game on and on bitch!!

Cr: Yo, on the real, harkly is the weekly and very beat.

Kenyon: Yo, Cruz, we undefeated.

JB: That’s right, we undefeated.

~Renny comes by his car~

Cr: Yo, I’ll talk to you later ah-i??

R&his men: Yo what’s up, yo be careful, the rock is high man,

R: How are you doing man.

Cr: Chilling man.

R: You look good.

Cr: I have some paper for you. ~with giving money~

R: Now we're talking. How are you living Timo?

Cr: I’m good.

R: Are you all right?? For real?

C: Yeah.

R: Yo, take some. ~With handing some money~

C: No, I’m all right.

R: No no no, take some. Please. Don't worry. You’re doing good, you’re doing good, bro.

C: Thank you.

R: No, don’t thank me, thank YOU, you earned it.

~Gives a pack of weed to Cruz~

Am I seeing you?

C: Yeah, next week.

R: Okay, I’m seeing you. Keep it up.

C: ~stare the team mate with eyes which say like that he envies them. And go home~

なんだか同じ方法でやってるのに書体が変わりますねぇ。

まぁいいか。

それでは皆様良い一日を！