CC PART ７ 添削後

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そして今回も同じような事が起こったのでまた２つに分けますね。

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~AT SCHOOL, CARTER’S MAIL BOX IS EMPTY~

Lyle: ~Talk to a girl in the hallway~ Listen, shortly you. I’m just gonna be real for with you. Huh?? You are a my girl. When you’re in I get out on that court, and everything is getsing justto go crazy. All I’m doing gotta do is just think about you.

Ca: ~find him~

Lyle, why aren’t you in ammmm, geometry?? Are you lost?

L: I’m going right now, sir. Ah, there This is Betty.

Girl: Bella.

L: Oh, Bella. This is Bella. Bella, sir.

Ca: Go to the class.

~IN A CLASS ROOM~

Teacher: Don’t forget this that these project to do are due by at the end of this week. So offend of you need…

Ca: Excuse me. Are you Mr. Gesek? I don’t see Jr. Battle in this class.
T: Jr. Battle is like a solar eclipse. We rarely see him, but when we do, it’s always special.

Class: Haha.

Ca: Thank you.




~AT THE GYM~

Kenyon: ~reads news paper~

Surprised arrivedal to the puoll結果 is Richmond high in at 19th. Oilers possed have posted a perfect to the form is 9 and no mark. Winning is allowed to a plenty of on the road against perenninal 絶え間ない power house exhibition Exhivier and box at uni Baxter union. Ah Jr, you should read the rest of this, man. They blowing up you to in this paper.

JB: …..Oh no…..

K: Come on man, just read it.

Team mate: Oh he cannot read.

Kenyon & Warm: Shut up, man.

JB: Richmond’s center has been big as the oiler’s ah…. boi….. boy??

Ca: ~Enters to the gym~ Buid Buoyed高水準を保持した, the word is buid buoyed.

JB: Buid with Buoyed by Jr. Battle’s in team 19. 8 rebounds and 9 a night numbers.

W: hahaha, See? That’s my big nigga, have you read thisIf you was any bigger, you’red be my bigger nigga.

Team: ~stand up and chatting~

Ca: Sit down. SIT DOWN!!!

Team: Shut up and sit down.

Ca: Nigga is the dlagderogatory軽蔑的な term to use to insult our ancestors. If See white men use it, you’lld be ready to fight. You’re using it, teaches him to use it. You’re saying it’s cool, well it’s NOT cool. And you aren’t allowe around me. I don’t wanna hear that shit. We clear?!

Team: Yes, sir.

Ca: Mr. Warm. What do is it you want out of this basketball seasons?

W: Just To win thisat state championship, sir!!

Ca: Who won the state basketball championship the last season, Lyle?

L: I don’t know Hell if I know, sir.

Ca: Does anybody know?

Ca: What’s your father do for living, Mr. Lyle?

L: My father is in jail, sir.

Ca: ….oh Well, I’m sorry to hear that, sir. But that doesn’t have to be your life. My point is this: I have 4 senior on this team. Jr, Lyle, Kenyon, and Warm. All of whom I think they can play basketball at college level. College. That’s available option for all of you. But you have to perform in the class room to have that chance. You have to have a vision. Tell me. How do you see yourselves?

JB: Yeah, ESPN, baby.

Ca: It reminds me Mr. Battle. Mr. Gesek tells me he doesn’t see you in the his class room very often.

JB: Yeah, we’re cooled though on me and him. Mr. Gesek is a big basketball fan.

Ca: Uh hum, as of now, you’re suspended. Ah you can practice, but you can’t play until Mr. Gesek tells me you're caught up in his class. And that shows up shout out to the rest of you. You signed the contracts. You made me commitment. Now I have your schedules, and I’m beginning toll be getting report to from your teachers. If you don’t perform in the class room, you will not play.

JB: Yo, what’s up with that?

Ca: Sit down, Mr. Battle. All right, that’s 500 push ups.

JB: This is bullshit!! We won those games, NOT you!!

Ca: Oh that’s 1000 push ups for Mr. Battle Crown. You wanna try for 2000??

JB ~leave the gym~

Ca: Young man, think about the choice you’re making if you walk out the door.

JB: ~Left~

Ca: To the baseline.