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こんにちは!蛙です。
ブログが遅くなってすみませんでした。


今日で今学期は後二週間しか残ってないです!

アイバンとよく「今学期早かったなー」みたいな話をしてますけども、
今学期の前半が早くて、後半がもう少し遅かったという結論に達しました。

振り返ってみれば、今学期の最初の頃は遠くに感じますね。
マーティンとアイバンとモールに行って、量のためのショッピングをしてた時とか、
最初の日本語学のクラスが大嫌いだった時とか、
まだ暖かかったプロビデンスとか、
全部がずっと前のように感じます。


具体的な出来事を振り返ると遠く感じるのに、
今学期を全体的に振り返ると早く感じるという不思議な気持ちです。


皆さんも絶対にそうだと思いますw






今週は日本語学の三つ目の小論文を出したということで、
皆さんにも読んでもらいたいです!

それほど自信がある論文じゃないですw
構成とかがあっちこっちでちょっとメチャクチャですけど、
アイディア自体は大丈夫かなと思います

基本的に語学に関するアイディアが一番大事だと思うので、
ライティングがひどくなければ自分的に成功です 笑笑




とにかく、今回は日本語と英語の新聞広告を読んで分析するという課題でした。

興味があれば、どうぞ読んでみてください!




Advertisements are literally everywhere in our modern world. No matter where you look, you can’t avoid this fact. Newspapers are one prime example of this; flip through any publication and you’re bound to see hundreds of ads. While most advertisements can be somewhat of a nuisance, getting in the way of reading the actual content, much can be learned about a language from the advertisements that utilize it. Through analyzing Japanese and English[1] newspaper advertisements, a number of interesting linguistic points emerge.

In general, English and Japanese ads are not too different from one another. They have basically the same goals, be it trying to sell a product or alerting readers of some information. Also, they are both limited by the same fundamental boundary of advertisements: providing the most amount of information in as effective a way as possible, while using only the space you have allotted to you. However, the Japanese and English ads take slightly different approaches as to what they consider “effective”.

One major difference is that Japanese ads are not afraid to use lots of text. They are often filled to the brim with lots of tiny font, and focus on why the reader should be interested in whatever is being advertised. Ads selling products explain in great detail all of the reasons why it’s something every reader should pick up the phone to get immediately. Images are used more as a supplement to the words, which is where they really sell you on their product. English ads, on the other hand, are centered on the image. The visual effect of the advertisement is put at the forefront, and relevant information is around the edges, providing just enough to know what the product is called, or how to find out more information about it to purchase it. The idea behind this style of ad is that images are usually more eye-catching and stay in our memories better than text does. As an English speaker, only exposed to the American style of advertisements, I found Japanese ads to be very overwhelming and unattractive to look at, making me want to move on rather than read more deeply about the products.

English and Japanese newspaper ads both make full use of exclamation marks. They are everywhere and often used as multiple exclamation marks in a row. It’s almost as if the advertisement is screaming at you to get your attention. It also creates a sense of excitement while reading it; because the voice of the ad is excited, the reader unknowingly gets a little excited as well.

Another common feature of ads in both languages is that they somewhat resemble newspaper article headlines. Because space is limited, they are often written in bullet-point format, and have bare-minimum grammar reminiscent of headlines. These are typically the largest words, with enough information to gain the reader’s attention and inform them of the subject of the ad. These are then followed by more complete sentences with further information, much like the sub-headers in newspaper articles.

While there are many similarities, the differences are also very apparent. Punctuation is one aspect in which English and Japanese advertisements differ. In English newspaper ads, finishing a line (when it’s not a complete sentence or part of a paragraph) with anything but an exclamation mark is typically avoided[2]. Periods are rarely seen finishing catchphrases. Japanese ads, however, take full advantage of the effect periods can bring to the atmosphere of the message. For example, one Panasonic ad reads 「未来を照らす。LEDはパナソニック。」(11/5 p.21 朝日新聞). Two periods are used to end the short, bold statements. If there was no period (especially after the second sentence), the 格好いいphrase would be wasted. There’s something powerful about finishing with a period in this way. “…. Period.” is a phrase often used in English after making a bold statement to express “That’s the final word. The end.” In the same way, the Japanese period is often used in advertisements in cases where a tough, daring nuance is most effective.

The Panasonic ad above is a great example of terse, effective phrases. Long, complicated sentences confuse people and lose their interest. While you can’t pack as much information in a short sentence, they can have much more impact if written well. Also note the ウサギ文 in the second sentence of the ad. LEDs do not equal Panasonic logically; however, Panasonic’s goal is to create the image that Panasonic has such high quality LEDs that the two are synonymous.

Depending on the style and type of advertisement, a personal atmosphere between the company and consumer is desired. One way ads tend to accomplish this is by using words like「あなた」or “you”. In doing so, it creates the feeling of a closer relationship between the ad and the reader. In a way, it gives the impression of talking to a real person, suggesting that you purchase some good or try some service. One example of this is ソニー損保’s ad in the 11/4 edition of 朝日新聞 on page 12: 「あなたはどこにあてはまりそうですか?」「あなたの年間走行距離にあわせて、保険料を算出します。」The first line was used to ask which type of insurance plan the reader is best suited for, given a number of options. The second line was a subtitle below a headline, emphasizing that you save money by choosing a plan that makes sense for the distance you typically travel each year. These lines give the reader a sense of closeness, as if the company is personally aiding them in choosing the most appropriate plan. Service is all about making the customer feel cared for, and using 「あなた」in this way does a great job of it.

The degree of politeness used in Japanese and English advertisements is another difference. Japanese ads tend to be quite formal, paying respect to the consumer (e.g.「ご質問だけでもお気軽にお電話ください。」11/4 p. 12, 朝日新聞). This example is taken from the Sony insurance ad above, and features a woman with a speech bubble filled with this line; she is welcoming and polite, just like a receptionist one can imagine would pick up the phone if you called. On the other hand, English ads tend to try to create a friendly, personal relationship with the consumer, and use fairly casual speech (e.g. “Coming to the new staging of Phantom?” 12/1, p. A9, Providence Journal). This example almost takes on the voice of a coworker or friend, asking casually about whether or not you’re planning on going. While this is not always the case, it is a noticeable trend. There isn’t necessarily a better or worse way, just a different approach used to reach the same goal.

One characteristic of English newspaper advertisements is the deliberate use of sentence fragments. For example, “5,000 years of civilization. Live on stage!”, “Take an Extraordinary Journey…”, “A difference you can feel”, and “A soul-stirring performance” were all used in an ad for a show by the Shen Yun performing arts group (12/1, p.24 Providence Journal). These are all incomplete sentences (except for “Take an Extraordinary Journey…”, but this uses ellipses to suggest there is more to follow), which wouldn’t be able to stand on their own grammatically. All of these take advantage of the impact of short phrases, much like the Japanese counterparts.

The last two are examples in which nouns are simply being modified. Normally you couldn’t write “A performance” in an ad. Readers would be very confused, because it is obviously advertising a performance, and since no other information was gained from that catchphrase it leaves much to be desired. However, by modifying the performance as “soul-stirring”, a phrase not lightly tossed around, it places an enormous emphasis on the quality of the show.

One example filled with interesting points worth mentioning is “Give them a Roger Williams Park Zoo Gift Membership” “They’ll thank you all year!” (12/1, p. A6 Providence Journal). This is accompanied by a picture of a monkey and two pictures of children enjoying the zoo. The advertisement refers to some third party as “them” and “they”. Taken out of context, this is unclear and confusing as to who the ad is referring. However, the facts that it is an ad for a zoo, and that pictures of children accompany the text, and further that the people most likely to be reading the newspaper and come across that ad are adults/parents, all combine to help you form the conclusion that “they” are the reader’s children. So why not say that clearly from the beginning? “Give your children a … Gift Membership” “They’ll thank you all year!” However, this would not be clever advertising because this outright assumes that the reader has a child, which may not be the case; it also limits the people you can give the gift membership to, even though the main target is parents who can get a membership for their children. By purposely leaving it vague, it leave many more options and doesn’t alienate anyone reading the ad. Also, by referring to “them” vaguely it allows the reader to place their own “them” in the picture. By thinking about who “they” are, readers imagine themselves having a good time at the zoo, exactly what the zoo is hoping for in this ad. Another point is that the ad directly refers to the reader as “you”. This is the same as in the Japanese case mentioned above.

In relation to this point is the idea of taking advantage of common understandings in advertisements. For example one ad reads “Season of Savings”, accompanied by “Shop Now and Save for Everyone on Your List” (12/1, p. A6, Providence Journal). Even if the first line wasn’t included, readers would find the context very obvious. Since the newspaper was released on December 1st, it is getting close to the holiday season, the main event being Christmas. Associated with Christmas is making a list of people for whom to get presents, just like Santa Claus; and thus, the connection is made that shopping at that store will allow you to buy affordable presents for your loved ones. This type of ad relies heavily on common knowledge of the target audience for their products.

While English and Japanese ads share many commonalities, one thing in English ads is made possible by the English language which is impossible in Japanese: capital letters. Because English has capital letters, the same boldness and font size can have a very different effect depending on whether it is in lower-case or upper-case letters. It is useful in adding extra emphasis to something companies want consumers to focus on. For example, in one ad (12/1, p. A12, Providence Journal), huge letters read “$300 OFF”, followed by “your purchase of $2499 or more”. By stressing the large amount of money you save with capital letters and making the slightly negative aspect less noticeable with lower-case letters, you can draw the consumers’ attention to where you want it without necessarily lying to them. Capital letters make this possible without even changing the boldness or size, and so is even more impactful when these are introduced as well.

There is a surprising amount of insight one can gain from studying the advertisements of different languages. Not only does it reveal cultural aspects and unique approaches to advertising, but also many linguistic points only made visible by comparing and contrasting two languages. At the end of the day, however, English and Japanese advertisements are not so different, and similarities between the two are as easy to find as similarities.

 

 

 

References

朝日新聞 Editions 11/4 and 11/5

Providence Journal Edition 12/1



[1] To be clear, when English newspaper ads are mentioned throughout this essay, it is referring to ads written in English, not necessarily ads from England.

[2] Maybe this was only true of the newspaper ads I looked at.




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期末試験は金曜日に一個、次の週の火曜日と水曜日に一個ずつあります。
そして日本語学のエッセイは12月19日までに出さなければなりません。

なので急にすごく忙しくなりましたw
今週中勉強していこうと思います!!
頑張ります!!:D


では、また来週!


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