While creating a poem show it. 英語詩with an Amoeba | 四行詩の例。haruo uema小説試筆帳

四行詩の例。haruo uema小説試筆帳

作り方は自由な四行詩を作品例で話します。


How to write a poem and process

 

"While creating a poem show it. Today's topic is (Fly). from this word look for associations and similar words."




fly.  Hmm.
flaw.
flay.
Flamingos.

"Flamingo? I see. The word is chosen by the subconscious mind.  They are metaphors for your feelings. Use that word to create a simple story."

I'm sick of my flaws, human relations flay,
I want to be free like a flamingo flying in the sky.

"Let's be poetic."

I can't fix my flaws, 
Hmm. 
Relationships flay. 
So. 
Flamingos fly. 
Yeah. 
I want to fly freely.

To see. 
I wonder if different? 
The bird goes to the lake.
Hmm. 

I understood.
If it chases a bird, 
Will reach the lake. 
Hmm. 

Flamingo into the goal, 
Flying means going to the goals.

"Please sort it out."

I can't fix my flaws, 
Relationships flay.
Flamingos fly,
I want to fly freely.

If it chases a bird, 
Will reach the lake.
Flamingo into the goal, 
Flying means going to the goals.

 

"All right, please edit it and make it a good poem."

Thank you.

"Poems are the self-expression of the masses.
You can heal yourself.
Let's compose a poem together."

created by Haruo Uema