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Unit1 Part3 Writing Task1
The bar chart shows the gender gap among→in the education system in UK in 2010.
As we see→from the chart, there are more women teachers till secondary school, and then at college, the number of men teachers and women teachers will be the same. However, at privevate training institute and university, more men are working as teachers. From this, it can be said that there are more women in lower education, and more men in upper education.
The gender gap is large in nursery/pre-school, primary school, and university. In nursery/pre-school, the gender gap is huge such as 96% of the teachers is women. This is similar in primary school. On the other hand, university has much more men.