私は今日から初めての日記を始める。この日記の目的は一日を振り返り、
それを記録に残すことと。また、それを英訳して英語力を身に着けることだ。
この日記で書いたことを暗記してしゃべれるようになれば、
友達とのおしゃべりの話題になると思う。どのようなスタイルで日記を書くかは
定まっていないが、なるべく完結にまとめたい。
(修正後)
“I am starting a diary from today. The purpose of this diary is to reflect on the day and record it as sentences. Additionally, I aim to improve my English skills by translating it into English. If I can memorize and speak what I wrote in this diary, I believe it will serve as a good conversation topic with my friends. Although I have not decided on the style of writing for my diary yet, I intend to keep it as concise as possible.”
reflect on で振り返るって意味
serveは役に立つという意味合いで使われている。
decide on は何々を決めるという意味で使われていて、decideよりも詳細や明確な決定を決めるとう意味で使われる。
intend to do で何々するつもりという意味。
(修正前)
I start taking a diary from todady. The objective of that is remember the day and record it as sentences. Also, I want to learn English with transferring it into English.If I can speak what I wrote in this diary, it will be a good topic for chatting with my friends. Although I do not decide how I will write it, I want to make it simple and short.