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I ate a BBQ diner(A) which style was Japanese. We grilled the meat on pan,(B) ate with rice. Mmm yummy! After that we watched DVD(C) about Pokemon. Of course in English. The Pokemon DVD is(D) My(E) daughter favorite one now. We(F) watched it every weekend. I(G) had never knew that (H)hero's name(I) different(J) as Japanese and English. In Japanese (K)called Satoshi. In English(L) called Ash. Pokemon's name (M)are same. But, (N)peoples name are different. Did you know that? I(O_) knew yesterday in (_O)DVD. I watched it(P) a lot. Why? However I am relieved to(Q) that Pokemon's name (R)are same. If (S_)different that we need memory (_S)twice.
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I ate a BBQ diner(A) whose style was Japanese. We grilled the meat on pan,(B) and ate with rice. Mmm yummy! After that we watched DVD(C) of Pokemon. Of course in English. The Pokemon DVD is(D) my (E) daughter's favorite one now. We(F) watch it every weekend. I(G) never knew that (H)the hero's name(I)is different(J) in Japanese and English. In Japanese (K)he is called Satoshi. In English(L) he is called Ash. Pokemon's name (M) is same. But, (N)people's name are different. Did you know that? I(O_) came to know yesterday from (_O)DVD. I watched it(P) many times. Why? However I am relieved to(Q) know that Pokemon's name (R)is same. If (S_)it would have been different i would have had to memorize it twice (_S)twice.