こんばんはsakuranです
第６回参加型英会話 熱く語ってもらって嬉しいですね
自分自身のコトだと書き込みしやすいでしょうか？
ではでは【完成版】です
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Today's theme：【Dream/Goal】
yu-keijima：
I would like to be a friend make friends with many people living
all over the world.
We will enjoy cooking, discussing or many things.
I would like to know a lot of things about overseas
and make them know about Japan.
That's my dream and the reason of studying English.
アンナ：
To begin with, I'm sorry about the following sentences,
for“dream” does not mean “sakuran's dream”.
I have a dream. But it'll never come true.
I wish I went back to 1960s, for I'd like to meet musicians,
The Beatles directly. I like them very much.
I am fond of their personality, words and music.
If I were to meet them, I wished to talk to them in English.
dai：
"Dream", I remembered Martin Luther king,Jr.
He had said"I have a dream".Ｉwas so moved.
My dream is like"Give peace a chance"by John Lenon.
I want to make our world peace for my son and our children.(＊)
I think there is not a goal.
But I have to effort make efforts toward my goal.
The goal is when I die. I hate war. Let us imagine!
Yoshi：
Talking of my dream, I remember when I was a primary student,
I'd have liked to be a painter.（＊訂正済）
However, after I became a junior high school student,
the dream disappeared.
Maybe it was because I realized my poor skill in painting.
Instead, I came to dream of my future as an engineer.
It came true but I ended up knowing it was not true dream.
I lost my dream and being lost, I think I've been seeking my dream.
I believe if we had our friends all over the world,
war mightn't happen even if we might argue.
So, I wish I could go study abroad.
Would you say I'm a dreamer? I'll say 'yes'.
hira：
I want to be an illustrator.
I am keeping drawing, since I was a child.
Now, I sometime draw a picture for job,
but I am not a professional.
Someday I want to be a professional.
I have to make every effort.(＊)
ａｎ：
I would like to able to speak english.
Because, english is usefule !
I went england for sightseen last year.
mu-ton623
My dream is to open PC shool that whoever easily can take any lessons.
Because I was been PC instructor for three years
before get married. and since as my living town is a contry side,
there aren't any PC schools.
sakuran：
I have many oppotunities to meet foreign students of my job,
but they go back their home some other time.
I'd like to go on a trip abroad and meet them someday.
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e-mail : sakuran09@yahoo.co.jp