目指せTOEFLハイスコア!英語力向上のためのよっしのぶろぐ -4ページ目

目指せTOEFLハイスコア!英語力向上のためのよっしのぶろぐ

急遽英語が必要となった純ドメな私の奮闘記。

英語で書きます。間違いがあったら指摘してね。

This blog is for improving my English skilis,in particular,writing one.

Please point out my grammatical or vocabulary mistakes on those sentences!

I've written less than 300words after a long time. The theme seemed easy for me...
The reason might be that,

・First, I choose the topic about swimming.But I can not come up with the word
about swimming(i.g crawl,breaststroke...)
・Second, I noticed the mistake that the phrase "use energy" was used instead
of "consume energy".

I always write just about 300words on independent task, so I have to think how to write more in time.


People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


Some people in Japan might choose jogging or running for good health because recently many people came to enjoy running or jogging totally affected by Tokyo marathon, in which we citizens can easily participate. However I choose walking instead of running or jogging for the following reasons.

First, I can easily consume energy and burn my fat than jogging or running. It might be true that running or jogging can consume more energy and burn more fat than walking. But in my case, running or jogging is very hard because I don't usually exercise very hard. When I run, I can run only one mile without stopping. After all, I usually walk after hard but only one mile running. On the other hand, walking is not hard but I can efficiently consume energy and burn my too much fat. In addition, I can walk longer than running because, of course, it is not severe for my body, which causes more energy consuming and fat reduction than my short, that is, one mile running or jogging.

Second, I believe that walking has low risk for injuries than running or jogging. For example, now I have pain at my left knee. When I live a daily life, I don’t feel this pain, but when I exercise severely, the pain always occurs. When I exercise, I use knee supporter which mitigates my knee pain. However in case of running or jogging, I feel pain though I use a knee supporter. By contrast, if I walk for exercise, that is for consuming energy and burning fat, I never feel my knee pain if I use a knee supporter. Therefore, walking can avoid much risk for injuries than running or jogging, I think.

In conclusion, I definitely believe that walking is best exercise to stay healthy.


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When the question contains the word "compare" as mentioned below, the number of the sentence is not important, because usually I must write an additional paragraph to compare.

(#105)
Students at universities often have a choice of place to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reasons for your preference.

Some people may prefer living in an apartment in the community. However I personally prefer living in university dormitory for the following reasons.

First, if I live in the university dormitory, I can easily and deeply communicate with students than in apartments in the community because, of course, there were many students living in the dormitory. For example, when I was university student ten years ago, I lived in the university dormitory for two years. There were fifty students living in the dormitory. It was very enjoyable because I talked with my friends about our study, future, love, complaints of professor, and so on. I could make genuine friends in the dormitory and most useful thing was that I could easily get test information from friends and seniors in the dormitory than those who didn’t live in the dormitory, because a lot of friends and seniors had enough information about that and exchanged the information each other in the dormitory.

Second, living in the dormitory is usually cheaper than living in the apartment in the community. For example, when I lived in the university dormitory, the cost might be about half of that in the apartment. The cost contained, of course, housing cost and food cost. I could buy specialized food ticket for students living in the dormitory. It was very cheap and the food was not bad and healthy. Usually students do not have enough money and I did not at that time. Therefore, it was very helpful for me.

It is true that there are advantages to live in apartment in the community. For instance, we can keep privacy by living in apartment. It might be important especially for students with their family. Also, the apartment in the community usually tends to have enough security system. If the housing cost is high, it might be safer. But I can find more advantages in living in the university dormitory.

In conclusion, I strongly prefer living in university dormitory.


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