雨と不調
不調のときするといいこと、
温泉、お風呂に入る
ハーブティー
美味しいデザート
映画
音楽
感情をかく
散歩
When it is rain I am unwell after I became well.
When my mentall became unwell I want to do the following.
First, I go to hotspring or take a bath.
Second, I drink harb tea.
Third, I eat delicious deserts.
Forth, I watch movies.
Fifth, I listen to music.
Sixth, I write my feeling.
Seventh, I take a walk.
However, it is not good to get depressed because if I feel get depressed I can feel other feelings who are depressed and I can feel happy when I feel good.
添削してもらった❣️
When it is rain I am unwell after I became well.
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When it rains, I often feel unwell, even if I was feeling fine before.
when it is rain→when it rains
rain は「雨が降る」という動詞として使われます
I am unwell after I became well は少し意味が分かりにくいので、When it rains, I often feel unwell, even if I was feeling fine before（雨が降ると、以前は元気だったのに体調が悪くなることが多い）としました。
When my mentall became unwell I want to do the following.
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When my mental health declines, I want to do the following:
mentall→mental health（メンタルヘルス）のほうが自然
became unwell→declines（悪化する）の方が自然
hotspring→a hot spring
harb tea→herbal tea.
desserts（スペル）
Fourth（スペル）
I write about（～について）
my feelings（いろんな感情があるので、複数形）
it is not good to get depressed
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it is not always bad to feel depressed
「気分が落ち込むことは必ずしも悪いことではない」という意味
if I feel get depressed
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when I am depressed
（条件ではなく、状況を表現する方が自然です）
I can feel other feelings who are depressed
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I can understand the feelings of others who are also depressed
「同じように落ち込んでいる人の気持ちを理解することができる」
I can feel happy when I feel good
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I can feel happier when I am in a good mood
「良い気分の時はより幸せを感じることができる」
（happy を比較級に）