こんにちはー。昨日一日中家にいて勉強してたら、夜に訪れた友人から、空気の悪さについて驚かれましたｗ
やっぱ自分だと気が付かないもんですね～。や～指摘してもらって良かったっ。
でもこんな日々も明日でお終いっっ。待っていたものが届いたので、明日から動き回ります。
あくまでお勉強優先ですが。
さて、添削いきます。
Damien: You should’ve spoken to me first.
Carter: What? Why? It was a personal choice for me.
D: So what happens to me? Are you still gonna come over to my game?
C: Ah, probably I’ll miss almost of the games Damien, sorry.
D: What I was doing was just playing Then I'll go to Richmond and play for you.
C: No.
D: Why not? Dad, you’ve always been my coach!
C: This is a great school, Damien. It Puts you on your in a great position for college.
D: Dad, I’m a freshman.
C: Just because of that I’m a coach of Richmond, you don't it doesn't change your plan for your future, all right?
~Ca: Came to Richmond high school~
Worker: Show me your ID.
Girl: I forgot.
W: Everyday.
C:Morning, I'm Ken Carter.
Principal: Nice to see you again, Mr. Carter.
C: You, too, ma-am. If the offer still stands, I’d like to be a coach in that the team.
P: Well, I hope you're to be up for the task with your many Those young men need discplines訓練, and it the job comes with 1500 grants stipend 給料 coming and a mejor time commitment for the next the 4 months.
C: I accept.
P: Great. We’re glad thrilled わくわくする to have you. Gentlemen, I do hate to have be abrupt たどたどしい、突然な, but I need to attend do have a budget meeting that I need to run to. Mr. Carter, is there anything do you need from us??
C: Well, I just need about amm, 25 copies of this document. I’m all set.
P: Right, would you see it to Mr. Carter….Coach carter. To gets these copies, sir.
Ex: Will do.
P: Gentlemen.
~Ex and Coach is heading to the gym~
Ex: I’m not saying this is not going to be a challenge your job, you'll all do. But you know deal here. Just keep this in your mind, those are good boys.
Ex: Guys, guys, hey!! You know I’ve been looking for a new coach, who to take over for me this new season. This is Ken Carter, he went to Richmond. He was a twards two-sports man in all-America. He still holdｓ scoreler recordｓing, for scoring, assists, steaels, basketball scholarship in George Milson university. We’re lucky to have Coach Carter. Now let’s give him the respect for he's due. what he’s doing. I owe you, They're all yours, coach..
C: Thank you sir. Good afternoon young men. As coach White said, I’m a your new basketball coach, Ken Carter. I guess I need to speak louder, so you can hear me. I’m Ken Carter, your new basketball coach.
Warm; Oh we hear you dog, but we can’t see you. The glare from your big black ass head, damn what a is hella you have a shiny, man. Do you buff磨く it?
C: Oh you’ve got a joke to go along with your that ugly jump shot as yours, huh? form, sir.
Team mates: Wow~. Hahahaha.
Carter: For first of all, if you need to know mac my credential 成績 as coach White said, on the wall there behind you. Secondary, your if basketball practice time starts 3. You are late as of 2:55. You, shooting the ball. What’s your name, sir?
Lyle: Jason Lyle, but I’m not ain't no sir.
C: You’re not a sir? So are you a madam?
Team; hahaha. Yo Little bitch!!
C: As of now, you are a sir, so the rest of you, sir is a term of respect. And you will have my respect, until you abuse it. My Lyle, how many games did you guys win at the last season??
L: We had Like 4 wins, 22 losses.
C: Sir.
L: Sir.
C: Humm.. I’m going to give you the contract. If you sign, and honor自己への尊厳 on your aside of them, we are going to be successful.
W: Damn. Oh what we are going Do I get a signing bonus to be successful by for signnig this contract for??
C: Yes sir, you are get to become a winner. Because if there’s 1 thing what I know, it is this. The loosing stops now, starting today, you will play like winners, act like winners, and most importantly, you will be winners. If you listen and learn, you'll win basketball games. And gentlemen, winning in here is the key to winning out there. This contract states says that you will maintain 2.3 grades point average. You will attend all your classes. And all of you will sit in the front of row road on those classes.
Warm: Yo this is a country side ass, nigga.
C: Excuse me?? Did you say something, sir?
Cruz: Warm was wondering, are you some country church nigga with the your ties on and all on that?? This is what you’re saying, you wanna say, right??
Ca: What is your name, sir??
Cr; I’m Timo Cruz, SIR!!
Ca: Well Mr. Cruz, and Mr. Warm, what you should both know is we treat ourselves with our respects. We don’t use the word of ‘Nigga’.
Cr: Are you some priest preacher牧師 or some shit? Because god ain't gonna do you no good in this will never know about godless our neighborhood.
Ca: But I’m liveing this neighborhood, sir.
Cr: Sir, can you believe that uppity傲慢な nigga Negro, sir??
Ca: Okay, Mr. Cruz, leave the gym right now.
Cr: For what??
Ca: I’ll ask you the one rest time, to leave the gym. Before I help you to leave.
Cr: Before you what?? Do you even know who I am??
Ca: From what I can see you, you’re a very confused, scared young man.
Cr: Scared of who?? Scared of you?? I'm supposed to be sound like scared of you?? Nigga, I ain't scared of nobody, I'll never played lay your ass out.
Ca: I don’t think so.
Cr:All right. ~pretends to accept it and try to punch Carter~
Ca: ~Grab Cruz’s hair and take his head to the wall~
Cru: What's going on? Get off me. Teachers are ain't supposed to not touch students.
Ca: I’m not a teacher, I’m a new basketball coach.
Cr: This It ain’t over!!
Ca: Is there anybody else who is not feeling with this contract??
Player1: ~leave the gym~
Player2: Come on man, where are you going??
P3: I’m not do ask for this high school contract. Tell us when you need real bonuses ballers. ~Leave gym~
Ca: I will do that, sir.
Kenyon: They are There goes out our the 2 leading scorerers from last season, man.
Ca: Well I guess we’ll have new leading scorerer in this season, huh?? Now I cannot teach you how to play the game of basketball until your conditionings of the is at a level is being that alloweds me to do so. Gentlemen, report to the baseline.
To the base line!! I presume you all know what’s suicides are. I saw the St. Francis game in the other night. None of them you had a problem with the shooting the ball. You all had a problem with getting up and down the coat!! If you’re late, you will run, if you give me an attitude, you will do push ups. So you can push up or you shut up. That’s up to you.
K: Yo, how many we gonna do??
Ca: Sir.
K: Yo sir, how many we gonna do??
Ca: Let’s see how many you can do in 1 hour and 7 min. Ah fellows, don’t make me commited hammaside, homicide殺人行為. I said suicide, put your hand on the line, put your hand on the line!!!
Until 15min, 17sec
はぁ～、やりがいありました。２時間位かかった・・・。
それではまたねん。