A ghost lives in every iPhone. That ghost seems likes music.
One day morning when I arrived at my office, I found that my iPhone was playing a music, though I didn't start any applications.
I was very surprised. I taped "MUSIC" icon on my iPhone, and stopped the music.
I met the ghost in my iPhone several times after that. I wasn't able to find the ghost started a music every time, because I always turned the switch of sound off.
The ghost started a music, but didn't stop it. I was troubled in it, because the battery of my iPhone went out quickly. At last I decided to fight with the ghost.
I searched topics like this on the internet, and I found a friend of mine! She showed me the way to drive away the ghost. I tried to put the center of the earphone-button on! I was succeeded to drive away the ghost in my iPhone!
That ghost was a specification of "iPhone" and "original earphone of iPhone".
And now I became able to call the ghost, when I'd like to start a music and to stop it.
Incidentally, the ghost in my iPhone likes radio too.
添削後の英文をなかなか載せられません。
コピペして、ちょっとレビューするだけなんだけど。
文章のスタイルを変えようとしたんですが、あえなく失敗。先生にも見透かされて、リテイクとなりました。
今回、日本語の言い回しに文字通り振り回されて、Google翻訳とWeblioの機械翻訳の適当ぶりを信じたことで、さらに失敗しました。
英語脳で考える力はまだまだです。
リテイクはfairy taleで押し通すタイプと、いつもの記事っぽく書くタイプの両方に挑戦してみたいと思っています。