To study  in college, I have been lived kyoto for two-years. There are probably more people than you  guess.The main street-Sijyo is always conjection with tourist. I don't like going such a crowded place,  however ,today  I went there after a long time because I wanted to buy new clothes. I was surprised.Because there was a lot of girl who was cute  to a level I have never seen  in my college.I was excited and really regret why I didn't go there until now. 

 

To study in college, I have lived in Kyoto for two years.
There are probably more people here than you would expect.
The main street, Shijo, is always crowded with tourists.
I don’t like going to such crowded places, but today I went there for the first time in a while because I wanted to buy new clothes.
I was surprised because there were so many cute girls—more than I’ve ever seen at my college.
I got excited and really regretted not going there until now.

 

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