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I donated some books to a private library. 
So, they sent me a letter saying thank me and a request to contribute.
Oh, no! I don’t want to pay for them. 
Why do they think I say “I can contribute if you want” ?

After correction 
・So, they sent me a letter saying thank me and a request to contribute.
So, they sent me a letter thanking me and asking for a monetary contribution.

・I don’t want to pay for them. 
→ I don’t want to give them money.
◎”pay for them” sounds like we’re buying something.
“give them money” or “donate money” is more appropriate.

・Why do they think I say “I can contribute if you want” ?
Why do they think I would say “I can donate money if you want” ?
◎”say” : it is used when describing general behaviors.




Sun. 14th June 2026 - Sunny 

I heard that Sumo event had started in Paris yesterday.
I think this event makes many people excited.

After correction 
I heard that Sumo event had started in Paris yesterday.
・I heard that a sumo event started in Paris yesterday.
◎”had started “ is usually used when describing that happened before another event in the past.
*The event had started before I arrived.
When just talking about yesterday’s event, “started” is the natural choice.

I think this event makes many people excited.
I think many people are excited about it.
I think it excites many people.
◎more natural 

My mom forgets something easier than before, so I was really shocked.
I’ll get counseling.
I  hope I’ll meet a counselor thinking “I’d be happy to tell you my own experiences.”

After correction 
・My mom forgets something 
→ My mom forgets things 

・I  hope I’ll meet a counselor thinking “I’d be happy to tell you my own experiences.”
I  hope I’ll meet a counselor who thinks “I’d be happy to tell you about my own experiences.”

I want to hear about someone’s own experiences instead of the usual advice.