今回は４回目にやったライティング練習の内容です。
Writing Task ②（Miho専用）IELTS Writing Task 2
Some people believe that rules and laws are the best way to change people's behaviour.
Others think education is more effective.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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② Mihoさんの文章を整えた版（6.5〜7.0）
意味はほぼそのままです。Corrected version
Some people believe that rules and laws are the best way to change people's behaviour. I think this idea comes from the need for guidance or suggestion as a baseline. If we do not have rules and laws, people may not develop common sense. However, education also works directly on individuals.
Basically, both rules and laws and education are important in shaping human behaviour. In my opinion, the biggest difference is that rules and laws are the foundation of human society, while education is more flexible. Education develops people's minds, thinking, and ideas, and even how they see the world.
In conclusion, people need rules and laws as a bottom line for how to behave in society. Because of this, rules and laws should be minimized. If there are too many rules, people cannot behave freely. When rules are limited, individuals need education to learn how to express themselves within society.
うーん。
ちょっと中途半端な感じ。
そして、息子達とルールの話とか、友達の話とか、色々話したことを思い出した。
学校のルールとか、野球チームのルールとか、、、母としてはルールよりも大事な事が世の中にはいっぱいあるから、
人様に迷惑さえかけなければ、基本は自分の頭で考えて、
守りたくないルールがある時は、なんで守りたくないか、どうすれば良いかを一緒に考えよー
みたいなこと言って、
率先して守りたくないルールについて愚痴ったりして、息子達になだめられてたりしてたなぁ😛