まず私が投稿した日記がこちら。
This is my first diary in English. I really want to improve my English skills, especially writing and speaking.
So I decided to take this lesson.
I'm not sure if I can continue this or not but anyway I'll try.
By the way, a big typhoon coming today and we had a heavy rain in the morning.
I was waiting a bus at the bus stop and got wet to the skin.
I should've brought some spare clothes on.
Oh, and yesterday my husband went to Nagoya to take a test and bought some cakes at my favorite cake shop in there.
It was a chestnuts cake and only sold from Oct. to Dec. It was really delicious!
で、こんな風に添削されてきました♪
This is my first diary in English. I really want to improve my English skills, especially writing and speaking.
So I decided to take this lesson.
I'm not sure if I can continue this or not(A), but anyway I'll try.
By the way, a big typhoon (B)was coming today and we had a heavy rain in the morning.
(C)When I was waiting (D)for a bus at the bus stop(E_), I got soaked(_E) to the skin.
I should've brought some spare clothes.
On, and yesterday my husband went to Nagoya to take a test and bought some cakes at my favorite cake shop (F) there.
It was a chestnuts cake and only sold from Oct. to Dec. It was really delicious!
Ａ…カンマの付け忘れ
Ｂ…過去の話をしているから、過去進行形になるんですね～、なるほど。
Ｃ…When を使うことで一文になって、より自然になるということかな？
Ｄ…wait for で ～を待つ うん、確かにそんな熟語がありましたね。
Ｅ…びしょ濡れになると言いたかったの。 get soaked to the skin と言うのか。
Ｆ…there には前置詞は使わない。
うん、了解。
次回から気を付けて書いていこう～。
英語の表現をＵＰさせたいならこれがおススメ～。
私のお気に入りです♪
