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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


I definitely disagree with the statement that modern technology is creating a single world culture. Some say that brand-new technology provides us with a lot of way to enjoy our favorite things such as listening to music or watching movies wherever we are while others prefer to share much information on the web. In my opinion, manipulating modern technology makes it possible for us to connect many different people due to the following two reasons.


To use modern technology leads us to share our information and have relations with people who we have never met. In other words, such technology can offer networks to become acquainted with a lot of people like Face book, My space, and so on. For example, using Twitter is capable of sharing my information to someone who happened to look at my tweets. There are many opportunities to not only allow my friends on the web to know my daily incidents but also have contact with famous artists. Now that the networking service is too indispensable, I'm nervous when I cannot access it. Although it is a fact that modern technology contribute to create a single world which individuals doesn't have difficulties alone, it goes without saying that such network provides people in the world with connection to the world. This typically implies that modern technology can create a multiple world culture.


Another reason is that advancement of technology allows us to communicate to people who live in distant places. For instance, Skype whose service makes us call our friends face-to-face is more effective for me to convey something to my friends who live in foreign countries than a letter. Such service is always available for me to exchange our daily information, looking facial expression each other. It is certain that the technology is more efficient for us to tell something than the obsolete ways. This clearly shows that modern technology helps us to connect to others through a plenty of services.


Hence I disagree with the statement that modern technology is creating a single world culture. The modern technology can make us not only have contact with a variety of people in the world but also communicate to whoever we want; therefore such advancement does not offer a single world, but multiple world. Without doubt or hesitation, it is convenient for us to use the technology.




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