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Do you prefer to be in a large or a small class? Use reasons to support your response.




I definitely prefer to be in a small class. Some say that a large class is always available for students to attend while others study hard in a small class. In my opinion, joining a small class makes it possible for me to leave better records due to the following two reasons.


A small class can provide us with such silent environment that our concentrations are improved so much. In other words, a small class is not as noisy as a large class since it has a few students. Actually, these quiet atmospheres require improvement of our concentrations; hence chatting with classmates is rarely seen in that class. On the other hand, a large class tends to allow students to chat for teacher has trouble paying attention to all of students. No matter how substantial the contents of a large class are, it is meaningless that students don't concentrate on that class. This typically implies that a small class can improve concentrations of students so much.


Another reason is that attending a small class enables students to ask their teacher a plenty of questions. For instance, such situation can supply opportunities to ask whatever they want to know. All of their questions about science, physics, and economics and so on are always resolved; therefore a lot of knowledge is provided for students through that class. However, it is impossible that a teacher reply to questions of their students in a large class. To realize that, almost a day or so may be required. This is an indication that it is efficient for students in a small class to leave better records than students in a large class.


Hence I prefer to be in a small class. Even though a large class is capable of providing a large number of attendances with some information, it is certain that a small class can make students obtain much more knowledge. Without doubt or hesitation, what we should prioritize is quality of a class.




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