Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
I prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Some say that it is easier and more comfortable to live in places that have the same weather while others enjoy seasonal changes. In my opinion, living in places which have the same weather is more preferable due to the following two reasons.
Living in a single weather can make me more comfortable than living in an area. For example, in the case of people who hate to live in cold areas, hot countries are full of satisfaction for them. Not only do they not have to prepare many winter clothes, but also are not required to use a lot of goods which make them warm such as a stove. Living in places which have the same weather can stabilize our lifestyle. On the other hand, seasonal changes oblige people who live in that area to adapt to several climates; hence these changes are not as comfortable as the same weather. This typically shows that areas which have the same weather are more comfortable than areas which have seasons.
Another reason is that living in places which have the same weather is ecological. To put it simple, costs to adapt to seasonal changes are not required. As mentioned so far, living in poly-weather areas requires the inhabitants to purchase certain products in order to adapt to seasonal changes. However, if I live in places which have the same weather, it is virtually costless for adaptations. As a result, much money may be spent on hobbies, recreations, and among others. This is the indication that it is ecological to live in places which have one season.
Hence I prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Although areas where the weather changes provide various funs such as skiing in winter, swimming in summer, and so on, it is the fact that places which have a single weather is easier to live. To live in those areas is my hope since I have lived in places which undergo seasonal changes. I can say with certainty that I prefer to live in places that have the same weather.
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