(要約問題)

大学生はジョブフェア参加したり、ネットで情報を得たり、インターシップに参加することで将来のキャリア計画を立てています。

インターシップは、仕事について知れるだけでなく他の大学生と関係も気づけす。

しかし、短期間のインターシップでは、彼らの勉強がどう活用されるのか気づくのが難しいでしょう。

 

University students  attend job fairs, searching onlin for information and joining internships to plan for their careers.

Internships are good opportunities for not only knowing about companies  but also masking friends who are in another universities.  

However, they may not be able to understand about companies in very short internships.

 

(修正)

University students attend job fairs, search online for information, and join internships to plan for their careers.
Internships are good opportunities not only to learn about companies but also to make friends who are from other universities.
However, they may not be able to understand the company well in very short internships.

 

(意見論述問題)

I agree with this opinion. I have two reasons.

 

First, some famous tourist sites don't have capacity for a lot of visitors.  In addition, the number of hotels lack.

Therefore, many visitors can't  enjoy relax tour and have to take costs to trip there.

 

Second,  many problems are caused  by many people. For example, roads are filled up by visitors.

Therefore people who lives in famous tourist sites are in trouble.  

 

That is why I think that famous tourist sites should limit the number of visitors.

 

(修正)

I agree with this opinion. I have two reasons.

First, some famous tourist sites don't have enough capacity for many visitors. In addition, there are not enough hotels. Therefore, many visitors can't enjoy a relaxing trip and have to spend a lot of money to travel there.

Second, many problems are caused by too many visitors. For example, roads become very crowded. Therefore, people who live in famous tourist sites are in trouble.

That is why I think that famous tourist sites should limit the number of visitors.