（問題）
"These days, many people work from home. Do you think more people will choose to work from home in the future?"
（回答）
I agree with this opinion. I have two reasons.
First, working from home has many benefitis for employees. For example, they don't have to use time and money to commute.
Therefore, they will have more free time and they will do their hobby, play with their children and do side jobs.
Second, technology is developping. In the future, you will be able to work from home which you can't do now.
Therefore, more people who chose work from home will increase.
That is why I think that more people will chose to work from in the future.
【添削後の英作文】
I agree with this opinion. I have two reasons.
First, working from home has many benefits for employees. For example, they don't have to spend time and money commuting. They can enjoy their hobbies, play with their children, and do side jobs.
Second, technology is developing. In the future, people who can't work from home now will be able to do so. Therefore, more people will choose to work from home.
That is why I think that more people will choose to work from home in the future.