English Click Here! Sweets!
This one is really anNOYing to us gaijins by the place called "Noi." (NOI - anNOYing - get it? haha!)
I am not sure why, but when I hear "Sweets Garden" it makes me cringe a little. Actually, it is not so incorrect, but something about it irks me. I knew about a Sweets Garden in Jiyugaoka. I paid a million dollars for some chocolate pastry that was all air inside and not even sweet. Not like America. You can pay $4 and get a triple fudge sunday with everything...
"Something Garden" sounds like some Chinese restaurant, example:
Panda Garden Chinese restaurant
Jade Garden Chinese restaurant
Imperial Garden Chinese restaurant
Chinese people in America use "garden" all the time...
The next thing. If you write English, and it is planned to be on a sign, or printed on a million napkins, PLEASE SPELL CHECK!!!
"choise" should be "choice"
Then for the rest of the weird English, I would write like this:
"Great choice of seasonal tastes."
It has too many words, and as you know I really don't like that word "sweets."
Slogans should be short and sweet. To the point, mind you.
You don't need all the "We have" "for you" for wordy language for slogans.
Bye for now!
I am not sure why, but when I hear "Sweets Garden" it makes me cringe a little. Actually, it is not so incorrect, but something about it irks me. I knew about a Sweets Garden in Jiyugaoka. I paid a million dollars for some chocolate pastry that was all air inside and not even sweet. Not like America. You can pay $4 and get a triple fudge sunday with everything...
"Something Garden" sounds like some Chinese restaurant, example:
Panda Garden Chinese restaurant
Jade Garden Chinese restaurant
Imperial Garden Chinese restaurant
Chinese people in America use "garden" all the time...
The next thing. If you write English, and it is planned to be on a sign, or printed on a million napkins, PLEASE SPELL CHECK!!!
"choise" should be "choice"
Then for the rest of the weird English, I would write like this:
"Great choice of seasonal tastes."
It has too many words, and as you know I really don't like that word "sweets."
Slogans should be short and sweet. To the point, mind you.
You don't need all the "We have" "for you" for wordy language for slogans.
Bye for now!