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Fix it English - What a breakfast menu!

Can you see what is wrong here? There are several problems.



First we have the word "Morning." This is correct, but I think it would be more natural to use "Breakfast."

"Salada" is "salad" in English. I know that many Japanese English speakers will make the mistake of saying "Sa ra da" but there is no "a" at the end. It should be said without any sound at all. So "saa la d" is correct. It ALMOST sounds like the word "solid."

Always use spaces before and after parenthesis. This is an open parenthesis: "(" and a close is this ")."

Also "weekday" should be "weekdays."

And the last mistake is a spelling error. "Holiay" should be "holiday" and well more than one holiday so it should be "holidays."


So for the Enflish, it should look like this:

MENU

Breakfast

Salad Bar (weekdays) 1,080

Salad Bar (holidays)
1,280






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