Essay writing exercise
Introduction
Humans naturally, via survival, seem to invent and create ways in which they can achieve a certain goal more efficiently. Currently, in the year 2016, we already face a variety of health issues from how efficient our lives have become. The norm must exercise a strong amount of discipline against the intent for the invention. Social contact, from these sorts of inventions, is decreasing in quality substancially, with impacts ill-natured towards mental health. - add a link
Main points
Health issues
- possibility of being just an organ in virtual reality
- cancer caused by radiation
- bodies built to move (blood clots, weakened muscles, unfit)
Discipline
- Inventions are made for efficiency, therefore less work towards the main goal - this can cause health issues in the broad spectrum, and mess with bodily functions
- Breaks must be taken from screens, etc, to combat intense health risks
Communication
- screens eliminate a need for face to face communication
- messages, without other explanations with body language and tone may be misinterpreted easily
- without real social connection, humans have a higher risk of anxiety, depression, and loneliness (homo sapiens only won the race because of their communication)
Conclusion