9/22.Sun

Today I had lunch with my (You don’t need to say colleagues; just with colleagues. We understand that they are your colleagues.) colleagues. All of them were womenand we chatted over a cup of tea for six hours! We talked(not only about)about not only our job but also our lives.I'm very proud (Proud? Why are you proud? What other word could you use?) of them and looking look forward to meeting up with them again! (Or and I’m looking forward to meeting. / Or and I look forward to meeting up with them again.)

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Today I had lunch with my colleagues. All of them were women so we chatted over a cup of tea for six hours! We talked about not only our job but also our life. I'm very proud of them and looking forward to meet up again!

9/21.Sat

I took an exam of Berlitz. The teacher pointed out to me that I had to learn more about grammar and vocabulary as Bob said. I must take a lesson twice a week. It'll be hard but I'll go for it to improve my English skill.

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I took an exam of Berlitz. The teacher pointed me that I had to learn about grammar and vocabulary as Bob said. I must take a lesson twice a week. It'll be hard but I'll go for it to improve my English skill.

9/20.Fri

I had dinner with one of my colleague. Or: I had dinner with a colleague).She is very kind through though two years older than me. I think (You think? Or I’m happy) I'm happy to have a buddy and eat delicious food. Maybe we can be happy anywhere and anytime if we have best friends and a cozy place.

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I had dinner with my colleague. She is very kind through two years older than me. I think I'm happy to have buddy and eat delicious food. Maybe we can be happy anywhere and anytime if we have best friends and cozy place.

9/19.Thu

I went out for a drink with my colleagues! We laughed a lot on the terrace of (What???) and we could see a great view of Nagoya.

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I went out for a drink with my colleagues! We laughed a lot on a terrace and we could see great view of Nagoya.

9/18.Wed

Long-distance is tough…I did it once myself; many lonely nights, many temptations, and many misunderstandings… I can't leave here right now because of my work and everything, but at the same time, I doubts (doubt) if I can do long-distance. A long-distance relationship is something I can never overcome, I believe. That's why I'll do long-distance just for a limited period. We will live apart for a year, while I pack things up and get ready to live with him!

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Long-distance is tough…I did it once myself…many lonely nights, many temptations, and many misunderstandings… I can't leave here right now because of my work and everything, but at the same time, I doubts if I can do long-distance. L ong-distance relationship is something I can never overcome, I believe. That's why I'll do long-distance just for a limited period. We live apart for a year, while I pack things up and get ready to live with him!

9/15.Sun

I absolutely must go on a diet because I've put on some weight lately... I want to lose three kilograms before winter. I'll be aware of overeating.

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I absolutely must be on a diet because I've put on some weight lately... I want to lose three kilograms before winter. I'll be aware of overeating.

9/16.Mon

Kei went back to her home in Tokyo. I miss her. She is so clever that gives me a lot of advice.. I want to be independent and smart like her. Looking forward to seeing her again at the end of the month:)

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Kei was back to her home in Tokyo. I miss her. She is so clever that gives me many advises. I want to be independent and smart like her. Looking forward to seeing her at the end of month:)

9/14.Sat

So just because you're
far away, don't think
for a moment that you're forgotten.
I'm thinking about you because loving thoughts travel far,
And wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a New Year
full of wonderful things.
Wish we could be together.

Absence sharpens love, presence strengthens it.

(What a beautiful poem. Did you write this yourself or did you copy it from some book?)


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Yuya said "Love puts the fun in together, the sad in apart, and the joy in a heart." I love it.




So just because you're
Far away, don't think
For a moment that you're forgotten.
I'm thinking about you because loving thoughts travel far,
And wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a New Year
Full of wonderful things.
Wish we could be together.




Absence sharpens love, presence strengthens it.
Thomas Fuller

9/13.Fri

My little sister Kei passed the entrance exam of Tokyo University! She should be congratulated! I had dinner with her and a waiter brought us a big cake. She was very surprised and delighted. After that I (I or we?) went nightclubbing with my friends.

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My little sister Kei passed an entrance exam of Tokyo University! She should be congratulated! I had dinner with her and a waiter took us an big cake. She was very surprised and delighted. After that I went clubbing with my friends.

9/12.Thu

I've continued English lessons presented by BBT(Business Break Through) online. All of the teachers working for the company are from Asia. I take a lesson every day and want to continue it. I know I must study grammar and vocabulary...So fight! Yuya said "Love puts the fun in together, the sad in apart, and the joy in a heart." I love it. (Great comment by Yuya)

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I've continued English lesson presented by BBT( business break through) online. All of teachers work the company are from Asia. I take the lesson every day and want to continue it. I know I must study grammar and vocabulary...So fight!