How was your trip to Yorkshire ?
Great !
But we need your advice how to make our article for readers.
Can you help us ?
Sure.
Let me see it.
Here, this is the first draft.
"The World's Tallest Folly".
What do you think about it, Sonia ?
Mm.
It looks interesting.
But the title gives away the story.
How about, erm..."Wainhouse's 84m Folly" ?
Now the readers will wonder what the story is about.
Brilliant !
Thanks, Sonia.
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