tatsumaki jigoku | Rico's Diary

Rico's Diary

talking for the improvement of my English.
I'll be appreciated if you correct my grammar mistakes or reccomend better expressions!

Tatsumaki jigoku, tatsumaki means tornado. This tornado spew every 30 to 40 minutes.
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My friend corrected
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The tornado spews once every 30 to 40 minutes.
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We had to wait about half an hour, so we had gelato while waiting, which are made from oita specialities, kabosu, pumpkin etc. These were delicious!!
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