（私の日記） I bought an (A)electronic book a few days ago. (B)It's my favorite author's new book. Her name is Nahoko Uehashi and new book's title is "Shika no ou". The king of deer in English(_B).
It's about the man who is infected with a strange virus. Almost all (C) her books are for children but I feel this one is different. The story is rather for adults. It is filled with anger, fear and (D)suspicious.
I haven't finished reading this book yet, so I don't know if it has a happy ending or not. But (E)it really appeals to me(_E). Ms. Uehashi is (F) amazing author. She got the Andersen praise this year. I think she (G)deserve it!
添削結果
I bought an (A)e-book (electronic book) a few days ago. (B)It is a new book/work by my favorite author, Nahoko Uehashi, entitled Shika no Ou (The king of deer)(_B).
It's about the man who is infected with a strange virus. Almost all (C)of her books are for children but I feel this one is different. The story is rather for adults. It is filled with anger, fear and (D)suspicion.
I haven't finished reading this book yet, so I don't know if it has a happy ending or not. But (E)I am really enjoying it so far(_E). Ms. Uehashi is (F)an amazing author. She got the Andersen praise this year. I think she (G)deserves it!
Ａ…電子書籍 e-book と書けばいいみたい。 Ｂ…my favorite author, Nahoko Uehashiというような形で、カンマを使う。 (例) One of the most famous artists in the world, Picasso is from Spain
Ｃ…of の付け忘れ。 Almost all of ～ Ｄ…怒り、恐れ、疑惑に溢れていると書きたかったので、当然名詞。suspicion Ｅ…こっちの方が自然ですね～。 Ｆ…前置詞忘れ・・・気を付けよう Ｇ…三人称なので、ｓが必要。
I bought an (A)electronic book a few days ago. (B)It's my favorite author's new book. Her name is Nahoko Uehashi and new book's title is "Shika no ou". The king of deer in English(_B).
It's about the man who is infected with a strange virus. Almost all (C) her books are for children but I feel this one is different. The story is rather for adults. It is filled with anger, fear and (D)suspicious.
I haven't finished reading this book yet, so I don't know if it has a happy ending or not. But (E)it really appeals to me(_E). Ms. Uehashi is (F) amazing author. She got the Andersen praise this year. I think she (G)deserve it!
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