こんにちは、もりぞんです
今週は英検の、英検による、英検のための1週間です
なので、エッセイ書きまくりです
シリアスなテーマも多いけど、仕方ないです
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Although there is a plentiful supply of water in Japan,
this is not the case in many developing countries. To
make matters worse, the population in these countries
is expected to increase rapidly in the future. Meeting
the world demand for water is a serious challenge.
We can address the challenge in three areas. First, we
must improve the infrastructure to provide safe,
drinkable water. In some countries, children die from
drinking untreated water. A developed country like Japan
should play a leading role in sharing the advanced
technology with the governments of these countries.
Second, we must conserve the amount of water used
in agriculture, which is currently heavy in usage of water.
As long as use of water in agriculture remains at the
current level, a serious water shortage may ensure in the
coming years. A more water-saving agricultural practice
is called for.
Third, we must address the impending climate change.
Unless appropriate domestic and international measures
are adopted to arrest the pace of global warming., the
incidence of drought or deforestation may rise with
serious implications for water availability.
Though the world faces many challenges, the water crisis
should receive the highest priority. Both the governments
and the people must be actively engaged to respond to
this challenge.
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