今日は、教育についてのエッセイを
シェアしたいと思います
（スーパーマンによる添削後）
Agree or Disagree: A college education is
necessary for everyone
Modern society often requires more than
secondary education. The number of college
graduates has risen in recent years. But this
does not mean that college education is
essential for everyone.
The first reason relates to costs. In order to
put their children into better colleges, most
parents spend a lot of money to send them
to cram schools or elite private schools. But
this is not possible for low-income families.
Even though the government and schools
offer scholarships, students from poor families
often do not qualify to receive admission, given
their educational disadvantage.
The second reason relates to personal goals.
For example, manual labor does not directly
require college education. Also some college
graduates obtain jobs not related what they
have studied. Colleges do not necessarily offer
their students readily usable skills.
But if people do not go to college, do high
school curriculums offer sufficient education to
lead productive lives in modern society?
Students study many subjects in high school, but
most of them acquire knowledge without
understanding it will benefit their future. While in
high school, they lack opportunities to connect
themselves to society.
College education is important, but it does not
fit everyone. The most important thing to all is to
keep learning throughout our lives whether we have
graduated from college or not.
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いかがでしょうか？
結局、大切なのは学びたいという意志があるという
ことだと思います。
なので、今までどんな勉強をしてきたかにかかわらず、
今、何をどのように勉強したいかが明確であれば、
きっと勉強が続けられるはずです