In terms of studyong, it is a big problem to keep motivation. Yesterday, I didn't study English ,nevertheless I had said to do all my best. Learining language is tough and the results are hard to reflect, so I couldn't feel my progresive.Especially, when I have mistakes, it makes me depressed and have me felt that I don't have takent to learn languages. However , in this case, it is effective way to remember the future if I could keep to make an effort. I imagine the scene I live in south africa and enjoy chatting with local people. I decided to restart from now.

 

添削後

When it comes to studying, one of the biggest problems is keeping my motivation.
Yesterday, I didn’t study English, even though I had promised myself to do my best.
Learning a language is tough, and the results are often hard to see, so I sometimes feel like I’m not making progress.
Especially when I make mistakes, I get depressed and feel like I don’t have any talent for learning languages.
However, in those moments, I remind myself that if I keep making an effort, I’ll definitely improve in the future.
I imagine myself living in South Africa and enjoying conversations with local people.
I’ve decided to start again from now.

 

 

 

不定詞と動名詞の違いって難しいね一個ずつ身につけなきゃ。分子も使えるようになりたいな