原文:Watching movies. Since I love going out,I see them in theaters. I also watch DVDs at home too,but I rather prefer going to theaters because it makes me feel that I came to see the movie. I don’t think too much when selecting,I just watch what I felt interesting. And since I’ve seen a great number of movies,I can’t judge which is my most favorite. I can’t even remember how often I’m watching movies too.
Watching movies. Since I love going out,I see them in theaters.
(動詞使用錯誤,前面都watch movie了後面怎麼還see??)
I also watch DVDs at home too,(also和too重複使用了)
but I rather prefer going to theaters because it makes me feel that I came to see the movie.
(整句意思晦澀,rather prefer的用法少見,後跟because也不夠恰當,啥意思這句???)
I don’t think too much when selecting,I just watch what I felt interesting.
(老大..你又不是以前看的電影,一般時就好了!)
And since I’ve seen a great number of movies,I can’t judge which is my most favorite.(這句總算安全過關....)
I can’t even remember how often I’m watching movies too.
(how often跟一般時,否定句的too最好改成either，不過有的地方沒那麼嚴格..)
改版后:Watching movies. As I love going out,I watch movies in theaters,and I watch DVDs at home too,but I prefer to go to cinemas for it's more real. I don’t think too much when selecting,I just watch what I feel interesting. And since I’ve seen a great number of movies,I can’t judge which is my most favorite. I can’t even remember how often I watch movies either.