今日もLang-8をやってきましたよ～！

こんにちは。今日もTwitterとLang-8をやりました！今日というか昨日なんですがね。

まぁ今日もする予定なので、許してくだせぇ～～。

早速、Twitterの内容から！

[Twitter]

There are short sentences, so you cannot have much time correcting my posts.

I spent total one hour thirty minutes reading a book all day.

I spent thirty minutes reading a book aloud for the two times today.

I'm waiting for my girlfriend in front of entrance of the station listening to music.

I will start to study English from now.

I could have thirty minitues studying English on train

I'm going to Yodoyabashi station now.

I'm reading a book aloud on my way the station.

I'll build a plan to learn English.

[lang-8による修正内容]

These are short sentences, so you won't spend much time correcting my posts.

Here are some short sentences, so it won't take much time correcting my post.

I spent a total of one hour and thirty minutes reading a book today.

I spent thirty minutes reading a book aloud twice today.

I read the book aloud twice today for thirty minutes each time.

I'm waiting for my girlfriend, listening to music, in front of the entrance of the station

I will start studying English right now.

I'm starting to study English.

I could have spent thirty minitues studying English on the train.

I'm reading a book aloud on my way to the station.

I'll make a plan to learn English.

I'll create a plan to learn English.

以上です。

まぁ直すところはたくさんありますが、今日も気を楽にして取り組んでいきたいと思います！

勝手に英語ランニング

合計学習時間：4時間

本日学習時間：2時間

Lang-8を用いての英作文添削を試みました！

今日から"ブログ"、"twitter"と"Lang-8"を始めました。

ブログでは勉強したことを復習するために、書こうと考えています。

英語を学ぶにあたって、何かに書き留めておかないと、どれだけ練習したのかすぐに忘れちゃいますからね・・・。

ハタチエイゴ：http://thewisdomofcrowds-jp.com/　に書いてあることを徹底的にまねをして、英語力を伸ばしていきたいと考えています！

では、Twitterでつぶやいた内容とLang-8で添削してもらった内容を載せます。

[Twitter]
I wrote short sentences, so you don't need much time to correct these sentences.

I spend about two hours reading aloud today's!

I will drink a cup of coffee before sleeping.

i'm going back home now.

I'm full. I can't eat anything more...

I wil go to the Japanese pub which my girlfrend work in.

I just finished part1 of a reading aloud book about three times.

Umm, go to bed for tomorrow

[Lang-8](修正した内容)
I spent about two hours reading aloud today!

I can't eat anymore.
I can't eat any more food.

I'm going back home now.

I will go to the Japanese pub where my girlfriend works.
I will go to the Japanese pub that my girlfriend works in.
I will go to the Japanese pub my girlfriend works at.

I just finished part one of reading a book aloud about three times.
I just finished part 1 of a reading aloud book for the third time.
I just finished reading part one of a book aloud about three times over.

Umm, go to bed so you aren't tired tomorrow.
Umm, go to bed.
Umm, going to bed for tomorrow.


ん～3人の方に添削してもらいましたが、どの方も修正内容が異なっていて、面白いですね。
様々な言い方があるということで、どれを自分の得意な言い方にしようか迷いますね。。。

基本的な3単元の"s"とかも抜けていたりしていたので、まだまだ英語の思考回路が出来ていないのがわかりますね。はい。明日も頑張っていきます！


今日英語勉強時間：2時間