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ラジオビジネス英語 2021/9/22 L72 帰国後のお礼
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Subject: Thank you
Hi Lucy, ,
I would like to give you my heartfelt thanks for taking care of me in Singapore and Jakarta. It was a great experience for me.
The Sky Tower project has started. I think it made a good start, but it’s just the beginning, so there are a lot of things to be done.
I want to work together with you so that the project will be successful.
Regards,
Takashi
PS: By the time you come to Tokyo next time, I’ll try to investigate about delicious tendon restaurants..
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* I would like to give you my heartfelt thanks for taking care of me in Singapore and Jakarta
> かるく
* It was a great experience for me.
> I think this is good. But it would be better to say why it was great. Saying that it was good because it was say, a learning experience would show growth and improvement to help build his career and it also acknowledges all the hard work involved.
* The Sky Tower project has started. I think it made a good start, but it’s just the beginning, so there are a lot of things to be done.
> It would be better to keep this sentence on a positive or motivational note rather than a positive point but negative point. Also there are some facts here that Lucy's aware of. So he could make it more about his observations.
* I want to work together with you so that the project will be successful.
> ＋ 一体感
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Subject: Thank you.
Hi Lucy, This is a quick note to thank you for your support in Singapore and Jakarta. It was a great learning experience for me. While I think Sky Tower One is off to a good start. We have a lot of work to do. I hope we can work together to make this a real success.
Regards,
PS: I'll try to find a good place to eat Tendon before your next visit in Tokyo.
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Hi Takashi,
It was a presure to do it joint presentation with you. Yes,let's work together see this through. Look forward to seeing you again soon. Either in Tokyo or Singapore.
Regards,
PS: I've attached to a couple of pictures. You are welcome to print them out to decorate your desk.
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* see it through とは【意味】やり遂げる, やり通す
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Hi Lucy,
Thank you for the pictures. I'll print out copies for everyone on the team so that they can see our glorious achievement.
Regard,
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Complex 複合の、コンプレックス
---------------------------------------------------------------- An exaggerated or obsessive concern or fear
I used to have an inferiority complex about my English.
Sofy have a superiority complex when comes to a negatiation skills.
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- A building or group of buildings used for a single purpose
The supermarket in the apartment complex makes lifes more convenient for residents.
commercial cpmplex
sports and leisure complex * leisure [ˈlɛʒər]
entertainment complex
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- Composed of two or more units
- Consisting of interconnected or interwoven parts; composite
It's a complex and difficult problem that defies easy solution.
* defy - To be beyond the application or scope of; be contrary or resistant to
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I'm sure I said this a lot before. But it's all about keeping your email short and sweet with a little bit of a personal touch. Make everything clear for the recipient and use lists if necessary.
The person may be very busy. So you want to make it as easy as possible for them by being clear, concise and friendly. We covered a lot of phrases and patterns that are common in emails. So I really hope you'll customize them to your situation and give them a try.
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short and sweet with a little bit of a personal touch.
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